The Art for the new character is in. This will be a new addition for the story and will most definitely effect book 2. Which will be decided by you! (in a vote I'll post later this week).
For now take a look. Ask questions and discuss.
As for the people who created it. Feel free to add an comment with any information that you thi...
My first draft of this scene had Whisper being untied and talked into 'seducing' the Prisoner. BUT! Why have a sex swing if you aren't going to use it? Changes had to be made....
2022-10-17 21:50:08 +0000 UTC View Post
Warden is slowly losing bits of her morality, hence her face being covered in shadows. The other part to note here is that the Prisoner also saw through her lies and wanted to see if Warden came to the same conclusion. The Prisoner would be skilled in dealing with criminals as Aristeans exclusively recruits from those groups.
2022-10-14 20:36:57 +0000 UTC View Post
Warden upping the ante to see how far Whisper would go in her offer. Whisper's assumption may not be a lie either. Even the average modern man is worth his weight in gold to a medieval kingdom. This should apply for the prisoner as well. All of this is STILL the actions of someone lying through her teeth.
2022-10-12 21:52:52 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm glad to have started concept images again, it always helps with the final product. Especially with magic. As you can see in the bottom right, I have two smaller images where I explored other options. The other options of the magic appearing as a giant sphincter, or metaphysical claws - were not as compelling as a literal seeping wound. ...
2022-10-10 22:20:34 +0000 UTC View Post
Most of this information lived inside of my head at the time of the comic's creation. Yes the kingdom was founded by literal star travelers. Yes, they knew they kept one trapped in the catacomb prison complex. After 500 years, did most of them believe? Yes but not enough to keep the faith. Warden was always the discarded war veteran. A story abo...
2022-10-10 22:15:42 +0000 UTC View Post
Whew- car broke down today and I had to run around getting that fixed. What a day. Thankfully I always try to keep a buffer. No schedule has been interrupted and the comic, lore pages, and even a concept art piece will be posted.
Back to the comic.
Whisper is making some good points here. The scale of favors is beyond planets and she&nb...
The afterthought is returning the kingdom and the lives of thousands on a whim. She can only say this because she knows how much the Elves' scale of comparative value. They think themselves above. (Which is why panels 2 and 3 are set so Whisper is larger and literally above Warden)
2022-10-07 21:56:36 +0000 UTC View Post
The sales pitch. She's working it hard.
What would you do with an offer of being part of the conquering army. To be given the resources of an entire planet...
So originally when I drew this page the words were much different. It had more to do with the riches and decadence. The image still works very well with the script and ...
Happy October everyone! Hope all is well and good with you and yours. This month, I'll make it a priority to create the twink character. Now on to the comic!
Warden thinks this is just a smokescreen. Especially after being snubbed for a sales pitch. Highly suspicious... It's a tough crowd for Whisper to sink her claws into and she knows i...
Hey guys, this is not a repost of the same comic. I changed the dialog on the last panel. Whisper was too confrontational when she said, 'you guys are fucked!' Instead she's more about being friends. Peace and free love. She would try to seduce them and have them lower their guard, not put them on the defensive.
And it is that time! The e...
Whisper dropping bombs here. They know...
On another note, I've decided to postpone this week's lore entry and post it next week.
Doing both the comic and the extra goodies per week has been too much. I will be taking one week off of doing either the lore pages or tracker each month. During that time, I plan to work on the sc...
Expectations subverted! Custodian Whisper ironically enough just LOVES to talk. She's been looking forward to this. And yes- the cave walls echoes, she's been hearing EVERYTHING.
I've been slowing me down in order to rewrite the script as it comes. I'm always a sucker for interesting stories and thanks to a suggestion, I'm taking th...
Not much to say in this piece. This is a quiet moment where Warden is assessing Whisper. It must be uncomfortable and frightening. Yet, the lewdly tied up woman is smiling through her gag.
On another note, I'm taking pains to have more establishing shots. Questions like, 'where has the light source coming from inside this cave?' hav...
More relationship and personality insights. Prisoner has a bit of an ego and enjoys appearing as a grand figure. Most people buy it, but not the Warden. It's novel enough to him that he enjoys her company more than he would to someone who would worship or fear him. I heard some celebrities are the same way and based these interactions on the ver...
2022-09-21 20:21:41 +0000 UTC View Post
Part II of II~
This almost expanded to need a part III. What I was thinking was to include additional artwork about each hound type. I'll create character sheets and writeups about each hound type and what makes them unique. Those should be started after 2 more lore entries.
These are the Asura - power seekers lost to the joys of war and conquest, held in check by a stern master. War hounds are like pack animals, concerned with hierarchy and willing to do evils to anyone outside their pack. I often think of the armies of old - risking life and limb just for a chance at pillage.
She will be more aggressi...
There's always a budget available for pervert magic.
Currently I'm still working on the Whisper interrogation scene. I've gotten into my head that I want to finish writing those scenes before seriously tackling making revisions to the earlier pages.
See you guys Monday with the next page and Lore update!
The Prisoner is teaching Warden all the useful tricks here. This spell and mental conditioning was made to quickly reward a small harem of hounds. This way you can never be too much in a rush for a quick one.
D&D spells have the 'Power Word' series. Of course the immediate thought has always been, 'what about power word orgas...' - Im...
Good dogs deserve head pats and treats.
2022-09-09 22:35:39 +0000 UTC View Post
and... a rewrite of a few speech bubbles of 210. The changes are in Panel 1 (and see you as her master) and in panel 6 (from 'eh' to 'bullshit'). These are not huge changes but they make the the boob grab joke better and helps to set up 211's dialog. I'll use this new version when posting it on every other site.
The Prisoner insists on tr...
Part I of II~
Here we have an overview of what is actually happening to the Hounds.
Part II will cover the Hound variants, their purpose, and instilled programs and dispositions. These will play a more prominent part in book 2 - we get to see it here in the lore sections first.
Part II will also cover the differences for m...
Working as intended...
What we are seeing is a compulsion. Crusher is not bisexual but now she is. Her preferences will be feisty short blonde women and her emotions are fixated on Warden for direction.
The mental compulsions are not complete. The Prisoner will need to have multiple mind controlling sessions with Crusher. Deeper l...
The mental bond here is a link, like a key to more easily access Crusher's mind. Crusher feels an almost like a familial authority laden emotion. Warden has a piece of Crusher's core mana intermingled with hers. This will be important in book 2.
And here's a post on E-h...
A perfect moment of Satori, a complete and utter comprehension and understanding, of how her life choices led to this moment. Her morally uptight society was founded on the teachings of a sex cult. Warden feels every quiver of Crusher beneath her completely one with her and the universe... or maybe it was just a really good time here.
FYI...
The Prisoner is the kind of person who would teach someone how to skate by pushing them downhill. With safety gear, but without giving them enough time to think about what they are doing.
In reality there's only so much room for exposition in the comic medium. With novels, you could have entire paragraphs as long as it is interestin...
I was inspired by but did not copy Alex Grey, an artist that captures the transcendental.
The Prisoner has taught Warden how to use mana sight. Most of it is done by manipulating internal mana towards the eyes and overlaying a rune inside the retina. This is a difficult spell that requires a mana pool to hold the sigil in shape. But...
X-Ray vision! Crusher is swimming in serotonin and she's actively looking for a connection. Warden is all sorts of horny and much more open to considering others. Their magic bond, their relationship starts here in this moment, while they are both in ecstasy.
I've been a bit sick this week. It's like a constant low grade fever for a few d...
You just can't let that friend know. It'll be held over you. Some secrets need to be taken to the grave.
Did Prisoner and Warden have sex if they used another girl as the condom?
