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Warden Chapter 3 Page 221

Hey guys, this is not a repost of the same comic. I changed the dialog on the last panel. Whisper was too confrontational when she said, 'you guys are fucked!' Instead she's more about being friends. Peace and free love. She would try to seduce them and have them lower their guard, not put them on the defensive.

And it is that time! The end of the month. Mega.nz links will be posted tomorrow compiled for all of the comic and other art. TTYL and thanks for the support!

Warden Chapter 3 Page 221 Warden Chapter 3 Page 221

Comments

why set up a sex swing unless you're going to play with it

Groz

Sha'Ra is actually glad they didn't just start spinning her around since she'd have cracked pretty much instantly.

Zealot17

Not to mention she has a beacon that she swallowed. She could be telling the truth and/or buying time.

Groz

Sha'ra/Whisper is probably wondering why the Prisoner is fighting against her gods and if she can change his stance,

Zealot17

She was ambushed by the Prisoner and immediately got into a fight for survival. Also, she's changing her tune now that she's been captured. But otherwise you make a great point that is addressed in a few pages.

Groz

How cunning is Whisper outside investigation / hunting? In politics / social settings? The elves actions after their encounter with blood magic, "Heal this! Dick wad!", doesn't sync with "let's be friends". Plus the Prisoner has already been inside Crusher's head and Whisper knows this. Did she slip up? A momentary lapse of going to far because of pride / arrogance in her cunning?

jbezorg

Thanks :D

Groz

Yeah that's a good change,

Zealot17


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