Warden Chapter 3 Page 218
Added 2022-09-23 19:39:20 +0000 UTCNot much to say in this piece. This is a quiet moment where Warden is assessing Whisper. It must be uncomfortable and frightening. Yet, the lewdly tied up woman is smiling through her gag.
On another note, I'm taking pains to have more establishing shots. Questions like, 'where has the light source coming from inside this cave?' have been a concern to me.
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The elves are pretty kinky - that kind of falls in line .... But point taken. I'll go back and make a consistency pass for her ropes.
Groz
2022-09-24 14:29:35 +0000 UTCRe-reading it seems Whisper's bondage somehow became more elaborated compared to how she looked when we saw her at the beginning of this scene. I assume a simple art mistake/change but maybe she looks so smug because she wasn't impressed with the Prisoners ropework so she got loose and tied herself back up again without the others noticing :Þ
Zealot17
2022-09-24 11:26:10 +0000 UTCHe found them in the dimensional spaces the half-elves use. Custodian Grace had the motherload of large dimensional spaces and there were plenty of supplies that he hauled from there and from the battles he won.
Groz
2022-09-24 03:28:21 +0000 UTCRegarding the second paragraph, I'd simply think of torches. Lanterns beg the question of where they came from. I guess the Prisoner could have found them in some abandoned mine?
Zealot17
2022-09-23 23:51:43 +0000 UTCLovely tracts of land.
Zealot17
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