Warden Chapter 3 Page 228
Added 2022-10-17 21:50:08 +0000 UTCMy first draft of this scene had Whisper being untied and talked into 'seducing' the Prisoner. BUT! Why have a sex swing if you aren't going to use it? Changes had to be made....
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Hmm that would have been an interesting character moment for Whisper. But the sex swing is too good to pass up yeah.
Zealot17
2022-10-18 17:28:34 +0000 UTCthe sequence would've been filled with her thought balloons, where Whisper realizes that Warden set it up so that in order for the deal to be taken, Whisper would have to be part of the harem. Whisper would've been trapped by the offers that she herself stated. If Prisoner is worth a kingdom, why not a Custodian? Whisper would've kept on a brave face and tried to drag it out in order to buy time for her rescue
Groz
2022-10-18 17:09:20 +0000 UTCWould Whisper then have (un)knowingly enslaved herself?
Zealot17
2022-10-18 13:52:19 +0000 UTC
