Crushed like insects. Whisper doesn't fuck around. Or so she thinks. Dun dun duhhh...
I threw away the original pages for this sequence and redrew these pages from scratch. They didn't sing to me and were only adequate, not pages . I believe these pages show the story portrayed in a better more narrative manner. In panel 2, the power and ...
Revisions! YAY!
Almost done with the brand new pages. Two more pages and the other changes will replace story elements, such as improving how these guys entered the tomb, and improving individual panels.
Hope you guys are enjoying the added scenes and I'll see you guys later.
This is all new to Warden. She doesn't know what the rules are and she's rightly, a bit concerned.
The year is almost over and this marks year the end of year 2 since I started. It's been 1 year and a half. I created over 250+ pages and several illustrations during the time. And I've never taken a day off for the entirety of that time. I'...
This is the dream world. She's had some training to defend herself here. She knows she can change things here. Whisper has always been shorter than other people, so she keenly aware of the height differences. In here, dreams are not just dreams.
The Tracker will be out later tonight. It will be hot off the press. Those are starting to loo...
Revision Day!
Two random thoughts....1) I think these are the best penises I've drawn in my life. 2) I know which Rocky Balboa meme I'd use for page 38.
Terminator pose- fuck yea~
Whisper here, is running on fumes. She's been captured by the enemy, kept awake, heard her friends be taken over by mind magic, and just now her play for time has been rejected. But she thinks that her play for time has led them to make a desperate gamble to attack her mind. She's maniacally happy that this is w...
Whisper does a metal band power pose.
When I consider who would be able to fight Prisoner in this field it would be Whisper, a dedicated scout unit. Of all the Custodians, she would have mental fortitude and anti-interrogation training.
As mentioned last time, directly affecting the mind is inherently dangerous as it is a two...
Revision Day!
Another 2 pages of sex scenes. These have been fun to do. There's more to come. - About 7 or brand new pages. We'll see - I'm trying not to go too overboard here.
Just like Warden in an earlier dream sequence 100 pages ago - Whisper is flickering between her costumes of her past. Here we see her in her Raven costume. She made some busty adjustments including keeping her right arm relatively free in order to use her bow.
Her control here is part of the reason why the Prisoner exhausts his capt...
The sled hounds! These lore pages covering the various hound types the Prisoner uses will read as excerpts from the historical tome the Wardens passed from one generation to the next. They'll hold eyewitness accounts, speculation, and the gear and tools the hounds used in their prime. I've been inspired by the video game anthology pages if you c...
2022-11-29 03:46:38 +0000 UTC View Post
So... from the previous pages we see that this pod-mate she grew up with ended up dying. She's trying to save him as if she is aware that this is a dream of her past. Because she is. I tried to place the speech bubbles where her eyes are looking for most of these panels.
New lore page will be coming out later tonight. It's a new typ...
Revision Day!
4 Pages woo~ - These do NOT have an equivalent page. They show what the goons as they had fun with Warden. Originally, I kept the pages short because I was concerned about showing a brutal rape scene and that it would scare off readers. I don't know what I was thinking at the time, as this is a comic started in HF.
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Wooo - The dream representation of the half elvish childhood. Sha'ra was a Raven cadet, in that she was able to become a mage as well as passing the physical requirements. Her training also included magical study, but primarily focuses on combat. Sparrow training on the other hand would only allow for basic reading and math skills.
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Transitional scenes~ These images show Whisper's past. She's grown up in an army setting, eating terrible food, and strict education of rote memorization. One of her friends have died during her childhood and traumatized her.
Next up; a double page spread on Wednesday. Which means in terms of workload - this'll be an overtime week for me. ...
2022-11-21 22:08:40 +0000 UTC View Post
Revision Day!
I wanted to add more smut into the comic and changed a 2 page sequence into about~ 14 or so pages. So these won't have equivalent pages for a bit. (Although I included the original 2 pages for comparison)
I'm working at a break neck speed and hopefully showcase 4 revision pages next Friday. (the week I'm takin...
Entry to the Dream sequence! - Next week there will be a double page spread depicting Whisper's dreams in addition to a normal page- so that is 3 pages in terms of work. In addition I will not be doing a lore page in order to cram in as many revision pages as possible. Now - I have to get back to work! TTYL.
2022-11-16 22:31:27 +0000 UTC View Post
Wow! drawing this head wound has been really intense! It's always a struggle to draw new things and funnily enough - seeping magical head portals are one of them.
Here we see a teaching moment from the Prisoner. He has a 'dive in head first' philosophy in his teaching style. (I'll see myself out)
Other than that, I'm busy plugging ...
Revision Day - Aegis won the Twink contest! Squee! It was an extremely tight race and it was due to the Subscribestar voters that upset Horizon's lead with 4 votes going to Aegis to solidify his place as the latest Custodian. As for Horizon - don't worry - with all things going well I'll try to place him in future books when we visit a new...
2022-11-11 22:50:18 +0000 UTC View Post
Woot another comic! Spent some time redrawing Prisoner for panel 2 and getting the abs right.
On Friday there will be more revision comics! This week there's only minor changes - a panel changed here and there. But after this Friday, I'll be redrawing the entire sequence for Warden's scene with the two sparrows. The scene has been expande...
There's a joy in this. The feeling of not trying. Not having her guard up.
The other direction this story could have gone is that Whisper would have given up the communication device in her stomach early. Logically it would have led to a surgical removal of the earring that would be fixed by healing potions or something else. I'm not a h...
Revision Day - Joy!
We have 2 brand new pages for pages 6 and 8! (with the exception of one older panel on page 6) The purpose of these panels were to show how the Divinity is treated and more information on the treatment of humans as beneath them.
Next week will be more minor fixes which will be followed by extended sex scenes with...
2022-11-04 21:11:13 +0000 UTC View Post
The Prisoner is use of magic tries not to be too invasive and stands with the positive reinforcements. The first time or the most memorable time is to be pleasurable. It makes future conditioning efforts more fruitful.
I'm always changing the dialog at the last minute making the comic better and sharper. I work in stages where I'm 8-10 pa...
Alright another lore piece! This one covers the first War of Expansion where the Pirate nations fell.
I actually liked the fact that I posted the text in the Discord chat first. It's a great way to get feedback take your input if needed.
Next week, I'm going to be focusing on the Revision Pages and power through them. While they are ...
Better veins in penises! I feel like I'm improving as an artist here~ and I love her expression in panel 1.
In future pages we'll be diving into Whisper's mind - you should expect more concept art soon. It'll kind of be spoiler-y - I'll try to get it out next week. The Mega.nz links are down and new links will be sent out via messag...
Hello it's Friday! Revision page time!
This one is an entirely new page that didn't exist in the original. This is a page I tried to do the first run but I never liked the results. It feels good that I'm able to add an environment orgy scene for the revisions.
Sexposition! It's a new word combining sex and exposition. I made this word. I am proud of it.
2022-10-26 21:21:46 +0000 UTC View PostIt's time to vote! Who will be in the comic! Votes will last until the wonderful arbitrary date of 11/11/22!
Here's the link to the images in case you haven't seen it!
https://www.patreon.com/posts/concept-art-73436461
Whisper don't wanna. She's going to deny it at every stage.
I think I'm getting better at drawing penises... life goals - yea!
Here are some of the revised pages for the compilation. There's a focus on contrasts, cleaning up egregiously bad characters like that general, and much much smaller word balloons. You may note that Page 3 Panel 3 has been removed. There should be about 4 pages (1 double page spread and 2 regular ones) that will be added afterwards.
Desperation! Stall by throwing bombs out there and see what'll stick! Whisper is the type to value her friends over herself and WOULD make a sacrificial play in the right circumstances. And this IS the RIGHT CIRCUMSTANCE! Especially because she doesn't know if they would just kill her if they found out she swallowed the tracking device and leave...
2022-10-19 22:06:41 +0000 UTC View Post