Warden Chapter 1 Revised Pages 1-3
Added 2022-10-21 20:33:58 +0000 UTCHere are some of the revised pages for the compilation. There's a focus on contrasts, cleaning up egregiously bad characters like that general, and much much smaller word balloons. You may note that Page 3 Panel 3 has been removed. There should be about 4 pages (1 double page spread and 2 regular ones) that will be added afterwards.
I'll post these as quickly as I can. I won't post pages where the only things that have changed are smaller word balloons. Thanks for your patience.
