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PATRON-EXCLUSIVE: What Makes Us Tick? [First Draft]
Added 2016-09-30 16:32:06 +0000 UTCAs a "thanks" to my awesome patrons, here's an exclusive peek into my editorial process. Here is a full, early version of the latest short, before a number of revisions were made. Nearly half of the riffs in this first draft were changed in the final version. I hope I made good decisions!
Comments
Hi, again, Josh, And thank you for showing some of your process. I'm pretty tired, after a long day, so I only noticed a few differences. I think your earlier draft was plenty good. Thanks, again.
Bill Lemmond
2016-10-01 02:59:16 +0000 UTC
