Mamarissa - Reward Preview
Added 2025-07-27 16:55:37 +0000 UTCDespite all that fatigue, I had fun while making dialogue this time. Hope you enjoy my small gag I put in.
Preview for our final reward.
- Hanada Yanochi
Comments
Thank you ! I was afraid that just a side view is not enough so even though it took a bit more time, I threw the cut-in so that everything goes smooth without any blocking view like Aradia said lol. Yeah, writing is hard. Very hard with a crowd. This is just the first time and I made it out somehow. However I don't know if I still can write a long entry like that within a day like this one. I feel like this slowly becomes a small doujinshi now haha. Anyway, I will be right back. Resting now.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-07-29 06:04:54 +0000 UTCWonderful piece! I definitely agree that the dynamic of the dialogue changes a lot when you throw more people in, but I think you handled finding a balance between the three pretty well. The facial expressions on everyone combined with the shift in the tone of the conversation really transforms the mood as the scene progresses from teasing to lewdness. I think the pose is really fantastic. I do appreciate a straightforward doggy position, I don't think you've done as many of those but I could be wrong. The cutaway angle is the cherry on top. It's a lovely piece.
Toastywafflz
2025-07-29 04:15:44 +0000 UTCThank you ! Now I realize it is my bad habit that escalates everything I work. From just simple monotune to ... this. Well, it's fun so as long as everyone allows it then I will continue to do it. Next time there will be a lot of characters so I will need even more time. Just hope it will turn out all right like this one. I'm back to my work then. It's nearly done !
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-07-28 01:51:37 +0000 UTCThese turned out amazing! I think you handled the dialogue between 3 people pretty well. I also really enjoy the various faces you made for all of them, they're cute! And great addition with the additional viewing angle, it's a nice sight
Ultra
2025-07-27 21:49:10 +0000 UTC
