Sneaky Peek at Tuesday's page
Added 2016-12-11 04:14:29 +0000 UTCA lot of the clouds ends up getting obscured, but they came out really nice, so I thought it'd be fun to see the Background without the inks 'n all that getting in the way.
ALSO, given how dark some of it all gets, I'm a bit worried about values. I tested it on my not-so-good monitor and it looks fine, but if you have a hard time reading the info on this image (especially you Mac owners), let me know in the comments and I'll make adjustments accordingly so Meg and I don't have to retroactively make changes when the page officially goes up.
Comments
Great sunset too bad the group is likely missing it
maninblack
2016-12-12 00:05:01 +0000 UTCI'm pretty sure almost all of the pages need test printing and adjustment before being sent to a printer, since the pages are in RGB but will be printed in CMYK. That just comes with the territory of digital to print work. Thanks for the feedback!
Meg Syv
2016-12-11 22:30:45 +0000 UTCThe sun actually isn't that high, it's behind background that represents the ground/ broken roofline. Thanks for the feedback!
Meg Syv
2016-12-11 22:29:37 +0000 UTCThis would be cool as a background
Shield Generator 7
2016-12-11 19:05:17 +0000 UTCI'm using a Mac. I can see the clouds fine. The bottom left text "art by Meg" I can read fine. The bottom right text ". com" could have the brightness toned up just a little. Overall everything is readable.
Calvin Nguyen
2016-12-11 07:27:53 +0000 UTCPersonally I like
2016-12-11 07:06:40 +0000 UTCOn my phone (galaxy note 4) the top of the clouds get a little most lost as you travel up the page. Personally I think the highlights should be brighter. If the sun is still that high and bright the too edges of the clouds should reflect that brightness. I get that maybe them getting lost is potentially part of the idea but I think they get a little too lost. It would really depend on how much of them gets covered up and what parts of them get covered.
2016-12-11 05:50:18 +0000 UTCI'm on a Macbook. I think the text is a bit hard to read? The part of me that has designed for print is wondering if some of the most recent pages (especially Brody) are getting a little dark for printing, since whenever I try to print stuff it always comes out darker than I wanted it to (although maybe I've just used crappy printers...). You may want to go a little lighter and more blue/purple with the shadows to get a nighttime feel without worrying about the page being too dark? But so far I can read all the important things fine and I'm really digging the dramatic/atmospheric lighting. Can't wait to see what it looks like finished!
2016-12-11 05:37:12 +0000 UTCWell I'm on an iPad (one of the big ones.) The bottom text looks smudged in the post, but when I tap on it to bring up the full resolution image it's readable. The rightmost part with ".com" is kinda borderline though.
Robert
2016-12-11 04:19:32 +0000 UTC
