New demo! forgive me for falling in love
Added 2024-02-24 19:02:25 +0000 UTCHello my wonderful patrons!!
I am feeling a little under the weather (again) which means it's a great time to write because the idea of being on camera is a huge no hehe. This song just fell out of me last night. I think it's got legs, though there's definitely finessing to be done. The arrangement is also very loose, there will be flute eventually. Let me know what you think!
xxMKR
Lyrics:
I try to unpack it, my thoughts moving slow
All the doubts creeping in, all the things I don’t know
I pour water in oil the frames start to rise
How could I be naive when it’s us on the line
But you hold me with all that you have
And tell me you never wanted to look back
This is the promise I can make
To want you and want it all more
Each sweet mistake
If hurt people hurt people I hope I’m healed enough
And hopefully one day you’ll forgive me for falling in love
I haven’t a ounce of maternal instinct
Is there something wrong? I’m not sure that I know what to think?
If we had one, would I trust the world to hold her?
I cry and I grieve all the ways I could fail her
But you hold me with all you have
And I never want to look back
This is the promise I can make
To want you then want it all more
Each sweet mistake
If hurt people hurt people I hope I’m healed enough
Hopefully one day you’ll forgive me for falling in love
We go through questions, exhausted the list
I looked out the window at the world sitting still
It was then I knew
there’s no I fear I can’t calm,
no question unanswered,
no hurt I can’t heal next to you
So I hold you with all I have
And I promise to never look back
Comments
Beautiful song 🥰
Charlene Arkanakyak
2024-09-20 09:38:03 +0000 UTCMalinda, what a beautiful piece of music!
Kevin Torrens
2024-05-02 23:03:11 +0000 UTCThis is great music.
John
2024-04-10 07:17:05 +0000 UTCbeautiful song! the verses have a sort of recitative (sorry idk how to spell it 😭) vibe to them
alipie09
2024-03-17 00:19:39 +0000 UTCBeautiful. 💚
K. R. Green
2024-03-07 08:33:03 +0000 UTCMalinda, I love this so much!! The lyrics are just gorgeous, I really hope it becomes a full song because I absolutely adore it! Hope you feel better soon <3
Jaz
2024-03-02 17:08:59 +0000 UTCWonderful! I think some cello would be a great addition :)
Levati
2024-02-25 21:50:55 +0000 UTCThank you, this was amazing already & cannot wait to hear the final version!
Mark Goldberg
2024-02-25 19:47:36 +0000 UTC"If hurt people hurt people"... what a wonderful multi-leveled expression. So beautiful.
Peter Kehoe
2024-02-25 18:36:42 +0000 UTC❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
John
2024-02-25 17:54:05 +0000 UTCWishing you good health! The sing is beautiful and feels quite bittersweet for me
Jonathan Isip
2024-02-24 23:29:23 +0000 UTCLove it
Teresa Macias
2024-02-24 22:58:50 +0000 UTCLovely.
KlausBeckEwerhardy
2024-02-24 22:07:36 +0000 UTCI like the direction you are going with this. I'm looking forward to the future song. ❤️
Mary D
2024-02-24 21:23:33 +0000 UTCThis was really fun to listen to! It's one of those songs that just fit an afternoon vibe where the sun is bright and you're quietly working on a hobby or reading a book.
Shelly
2024-02-24 21:22:26 +0000 UTCAbsolutely Beautiful 😍 Thank you for such an amazing song! Can't wait for it to come out!
Triple Cerulean
2024-02-24 20:55:23 +0000 UTCThank you for taking me out of my messy world and into a beautiful space. I love this! A flute will be lovely.
Don Evans
2024-02-24 20:36:23 +0000 UTCMost beautiful song I've heard in a long time, as it sits! You are incredibly special! Yes this one has excellent legs!
John
2024-02-24 20:28:20 +0000 UTCWow, I always love how you build upon the levels of your voice! What a beautiful song that expresses in words what so many of us are unable to
Michael Caswell
2024-02-24 20:26:41 +0000 UTCLove, love, love! Wow, what an emotional song. What a difference sound-wise from the last song you played for us on the livestream. With that one, I'm like "Let's dance!" Where with this one, I'm like "Eyes closed, swaying back and forth and taking in all of the feelings from it." (Thinking in terms of a concert) I felt like because of the context of this song, it needed to be slower and kept simple. Because it was basically just your voice and the guitar, my mind could really just listen and focus on each lyric and feel the emotion behind them. I know adding in the flute is going to add to it even more but not take anything away from those emotional lyrics. I want to say too that it's not like the lyrics aren't heard/felt with your other songs that have more going on, it's just with this song in particular, I feel like the slow/simple vibes are the way to go. Thanks for another amazing one, Malinda ❤️ I can't wait until I hear the finished song!
Sarah Olson
2024-02-24 20:07:59 +0000 UTCSpringtime, sunshine and longer days are just a few weeks away. You’ll start feeling better - guaranteed.
Paul Biener
2024-02-24 19:36:07 +0000 UTCThank you for making this rough week just a little better
Mikey Sorrentino
2024-02-24 19:35:51 +0000 UTCThis is so beautiful and calm
Luna wright
2024-02-24 19:33:32 +0000 UTCI‘m sitting here and listening to it on repeat. It‘s so beautiful. Meanwhile I can see the likes rising, so I seem not to be alone liking it. what a perfect moment.
Christian S
2024-02-24 19:30:23 +0000 UTCAye that's a beautiful song, I'm sure it'll sound even better when it's finalised
Fewgrain42
2024-02-24 19:20:13 +0000 UTCYour music has always been such a gift in my life. Thank you once again for yet another song that says things I don’t know how to. And thank you for sharing something a little more raw with us. It’s beautiful.
Gobo Fatum
2024-02-24 19:12:31 +0000 UTCWhat a beautiful song it sounds great.
Christer Lind
2024-02-24 19:09:51 +0000 UTCugh I love your outros, you can stack vocals like no other
xin ♡
2024-02-24 19:08:38 +0000 UTCNEEDED IT IM GAY FOR MY FRIEND
Kara Petrich
2024-02-24 19:05:03 +0000 UTCIt also sounds incredible, can't wait to hear what it turns into once it's finished ❤️ this is so lovely!
Klea
2024-02-24 19:04:35 +0000 UTCOmggg this is such a good song title!!!
Klea
2024-02-24 19:03:14 +0000 UTC
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