Rate Scary Comic PART 4
Added 2023-09-28 20:52:32 +0000 UTCYou can also levae your comments about what you liked about this installment and what you think it needs to improve.
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Thank you I appreciate it ^^
mangrowing
2023-09-30 01:05:17 +0000 UTCAnother note. What many people loved about your Bug Story comic was how slow she was growing and her emotions towards it. She didn't know how much she wanted bigger boobs until she got them, then they got too big, then she wanted them gone then she couldn't resist going bigger. Maybe an idea for future babes.
DUxMORTEM
2023-09-29 20:47:34 +0000 UTCAnd expect more weird things to happen XD
mangrowing
2023-09-29 19:10:37 +0000 UTCI think the part was very good. The humor was great. I feel like you are not just trying to create BE art, but rather tell a story with a breast expansion centric focus. If you want to push the plot forward, not every panel/page can be just fan service. I am excited for the next part.
Feuergreif1758
2023-09-29 17:52:36 +0000 UTCThis is a comic where weird events happen, I hope what I have in mind fits with your request ;)
mangrowing
2023-09-29 17:46:11 +0000 UTCMaybe you're right, but I've already done that with other comics and I wanted to try with more characters and see how I can handle it. Thnx for your point of view.
mangrowing
2023-09-29 17:43:36 +0000 UTCI appreciate your sincerity. Noted.
mangrowing
2023-09-29 17:41:10 +0000 UTCSo i'm going to be a bit harsh but there were no breast expansion scenes in this set, in fact two women deflated. its one reason i left the BEstory club was so many artists would make a BE comic and some whole chapters didn't have any BE in it, just alot of setup. Another note is too many comedy references in one chapter. i get to references but space them out more for comedic effect. Also may i suggest in the ending that Papaya gets the contract and ends up in hell, but she has the most colossal tits ever and she becomes the new devil, both hinting and a future installment or at least Papaya got her dream at all costs.
DUxMORTEM
2023-09-29 09:37:49 +0000 UTCI feel the number of characters can be pared down, tbh. I'd say 4 characters, tops, that way they can all get a lot of showtime.
Zeerol
2023-09-29 00:59:42 +0000 UTCAs others have said, Papayas quest to get bigger is the highlight. Hope to see plenty of growth on her end. It might be because we only get a handful of pages at a time but it feels like the actual story is really slow in rolling out. Sometimes there are jokes or references that I completely don't get
HideousToshi
2023-09-28 23:10:32 +0000 UTCWould love to see more implant-related content. Fake breasted characters, bigger implants, talks about them and all that. Papaya's drive to get bigger through artificial means is the highlight of the whole series.
NagaSnake
2023-09-28 21:25:26 +0000 UTCIt was fun to see the continuation, though it was much more weird than I was expecting
YesImCanadian
2023-09-28 21:22:21 +0000 UTCGreat fun but as above I've love to see Papaya get as massive as she wants to. Ideally involving her implants in a creative way. May she can somehow trap the ghosts in her implants somehow and make them grow massively?
Danbutch24
2023-09-28 20:57:36 +0000 UTCOverall a really fun comic, with some spectacular expansion on display as well. I can only hope that the finale it’s building to involves Papaya finally getting the massive boobs she craves, even in some twisted, cursed way… but that’s more of a personal preference than anything.
QueenAkron
2023-09-28 20:56:03 +0000 UTC
