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Rhiyen's Deal, Part III

Hello, here is the next section of the story. I hope to pick up the pace a bit when I get some health issues resolved. Hope you enjoy this, and please let me know what you think!

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Sorry I didn't see your reply, apparently Patreon doesn't notify me for things like that. A nice, easy question might be 'What ended the Missouri Compromise?', with the answer being the 'Kansas-Nebraska Act'.

Ben Wilcox

Some teachers tended to take liberties with the curriculum, especially back before standardized testing became so widespread. On the other hand, some school districts may have been a bit stricter than mine was. Any ideas for a good (if obvious) question based on that time period?

Matthew Schocke

If you don't mind a minor nitpick for chapter 12, it struck me as I was reading - they're now in, what, November? And they're only up to the French and Indian War? Most American history classes get there by week two, week three at the latest. If it doesn't have any plot relevance, I'd swap it out for something around the time of the Missouri Compromise, as that's more like where they'd be - certainly post-revolution.

Ben Wilcox


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