Rhiyen's Journey - Part XIII
Added 2017-08-30 21:12:29 +0000 UTCHere's the latest update. I've made an effort to address some of the things that often get glossed over in fantasy stories. Particularly when travelling, etc...
I don't think I've gone too far (like digging latrines, etc...), but I hope these touches make the story seem more real.
Are they working? Or is it jarring? Please let me know!
