ReVoB: 20.23
Added 2022-12-16 22:05:58 +0000 UTCWilliam T. Barnes, professional bystander, everyone
colors by CrossroadsPony!
Comments
Your swatch was pretty spot-on, I was delighted to use it (lmao Enter key got me) Yeah that BARE LIGHT BULB energy is fun, and I appresh what you did with the drop shadows. Haha yeah, it's never fun to read about a rebel cell ~ everything's peachy ~ and everyone's on the same page, considering they're all technically lawbreakers and there's many different approaches to protest/reform. These guys are the guerrillas and STILL can't see eye-to-eye. ...insert wheelchair joke Wash ALWAYS prepped for the worst, poor lad, and yes - the chair makes it challenging, but Nelson's arms always break out and make the best gestures. Thanks again for your sweet work and support, whorse
Myshu
2022-12-17 20:20:33 +0000 UTClmaoooo poor Barnes. He really is interesting, I swear. Mmm thank you for the feedback on the colors. I'll have to remember to ask on the next page if you had to change the underlay at all, not that it takes much time for you to swap that out. This page was a treat, I love that high, stark light source. I got to try and combine all the lessons you've been giving me lately on both hard shadows, folds and drop shadows, too. I hope it wasn't too much work to clean it all up. I really love how you write dialogue between Nelson and Wash. They have such a contentious relationship but they're both leaders who share certain qualities so having them butt heads is both something expected, but also a little frustrating for the viewer because like...*god* imagine how much better off thing s would already be if they set that shit aside and worked more closely together. Guess that's what York and Samael have been trying to do for the last few years. This background is still stunning, will not cease to be stunning. Your establishing shots are both gorgeous and the angle of the room is especially attractive. I really like the way the room feels so real -- the three characters fit so well into it, it doesn't look too big or too small. The posing is all excellent, too -- Will looks awkward and nervous, very reserved in how he's standing there. Wash LOOKS like he's trying to seem relaxed, but you can practically smell his apprehension for the worst outcome. And you do a fine job with Nelson's arms and expressions -- that wheelchair provides her a place to grip into because I feel like she's the kinda person who doesn't always know what to do with her hands. (Summin' else she 'n BigCone share, eh) The shared social discomfort between them all is on display perfectly. Really excited to set all this coming together, and I hope I can help contribute to the amazing story in due time when we get around to our li'l bandits' hand in this whole thing. Got me pumped, Cone.
Pony
2022-12-17 04:53:28 +0000 UTC
