ReVoB: 20.24 (Chapter Finale!)
Added 2023-01-02 03:50:21 +0000 UTCI always wanted to see a party thrown by the Polar Bear Club
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Hell yeah, you rocked that indoor lighting, especially drop shadows (and yeah, I'll grant those lens flares, that'll do pup) [spits out ability to leg] Nelson still one'a your finer creations, so lively and acerbic. We love that ex-Freelancer :allears: Thanks for riding with me on this chapter!
Myshu
2023-01-02 21:59:11 +0000 UTC[spits out Polar Bear Club] dam.u Man these three (three??) pages were a good challenge. The indoor lighting was really fun for me to figure out and you had such a good range of faces and poses. Wash's shift from nervous and closed off to surprised and then a delightful little moment of *awkward* at the last panel was my favorite part of the whole shebang. He's such an expressive li'l pine cone when he gets the chance. Nelson was great too, though -- you're really learning how to characterize her without the ability to...y'know, LEG. Good gestures and even though most of her faces are a mix of growl, snarl and grump, we get some great nuance with her eyes and posturing. They all play real well together under yer fine pen-work. This is a short but really nicely composed end to the chapter. Wash and Nelson weren't friends before, they aren't friends now (YET!?!!) so it didn't need to be drawn out. It was the perfect amount of tension and directness, all with Nelson's classic Lying Through Omission, poor Wash has no idea she *triple-checked* between Trevor, the ex-Freelancer and THAT ONE MISSION that...I get to write in...a few months. Dang. IT'S OKAY I'll get there. You did a great job, and I hope you don't let the time it took to finish this chapter make you feel bad. It was worth it and I think the quality speaks for itself. Can't wait to continue this journey wit' ya.
Pony
2023-01-02 04:12:58 +0000 UTC
