My Little Ventrue Pt.8 Ch.5 (Ch. 123)
Added 2021-10-24 18:27:35 +0000 UTCMore things!
We're definitely not spending all of Part 8 in the Great Below, but it's serving as an intermediary step to build up to story threads I've already established. No worries, I'm not pulling more story threads out of my ass, with no intention of tying up old ones.
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Comments
Woops, I did mean part 8. As for Avery, well I guess it depends on how you read her voice. She talks with some bite, but she's also quite old. I didn't think some older sounding words like fellow or blasted were out of her reach :thinking:
Novus Animus
2021-10-25 18:03:52 +0000 UTCI hope you mean part 8 🙂. It doesn’t feel right Avery using the word “fellow”. First time I think you used it was out of Sam’s mouth and it fits her personality. You’ve had her say it a couple times at this point when talking about Jacob. Same with blasted when referring to Daniel. I can’t remember who else said it but it doesn’t feel right anyone other than Elaine saying it.
Memoryleak
2021-10-25 17:43:55 +0000 UTCI'm surprised Jack didn't start singing Ghostbusters.
Rogue
2021-10-25 12:44:53 +0000 UTC
