Best Laid Plans, Part 2

Hi Nick, I missed to download part 2. Is there any chance to get a new link?

Yes i live in Europe and my first thought was that it would be nice to meet you even as short as a drink. But then I realized that vacacions are vacacions.

Hi Nick,

She would. Besides, I don't make changes to a published story unless it's a typo. The review period for this one was <em>months</em> ago.

Nick Scipio

You and I have our tryst and then David and Erin do something similar. When talking to her son, would she use her husband’s name? Or “Dad” or “Your father” ?

Johnny Galt

Thanks Nick. . . Appreciate it and you.

Will do.

Nick Scipio

I didn't get the email, so... Update your address book: nick@nickscipio.com (However, I have your email, so I'll send it to you.)

Nick Scipio

I bought the original back when but missed the link to part one, so please?

I read the full book when you first published it. Somehow I didn't get part one of this version. I emailed you about that, hope right email. Is there going to be a link for the full version for Staff Members when you post Part 3?

I had the same question (does Brooke's last name begin with C). In some other forum, I was assured [a] that it does not, [b] that we will hear Brooke's last name in an upcoming chapter, [c] that it is not a major plot point but just a name, [d] that almost every character mentioned has an established last name, but [e] plenty of them just happen to have not been mentioned yet. Paul doesn't laboriously document them all in his telling of the story, especially in dialogue, mostly because really how often do people conversationally say last names?

I'll send you a link. No worries. It's "free" for patrons. (TANSTAAFL applies, of course, since you pay to be a patron, but you know what I mean.)

Nick Scipio

Christy will want the details about Leah or Erin and will hold back oral until the truth comes out. Likely Christy will be turned on by the truth and set up a threesome with Paul, Brooke and herself. Anyone else notice we have not seen Brooke's last name? Anyone think it might be "C" something and introduce another wife candidate?

This is the part where I kick myself for not reading last week’s installment in a timely manner 😟 Since I now have to buy it and want to make sure I get the right one, where (other than amazon) can I get the updated first installment?

Same comment as the one to Mark (above).

Nick Scipio

You'll have to read to find out, of course. 🤐

Nick Scipio

I'm a bit surprised Paul took the bait, without really thinking through first. He and Christy talked about Erin. She has no clue he had an interest in his mother though. The inner dialogue in deciding whether, why and how to tell Christy will be interesting, to say the least. I know Beth said she didn't want to throw a stick of dynamite in Paul and Christy's relationship, but it is certainly a potential stick of dynamite. He will have to be careful how to bring this up. We have yet to see just how far Christy's prurient interests and kinks extend.

Also include Jack, Susan's husband, in Nereids.

Big Ed Magusson

So good. I remain fascinated to see what Christy's reaction to this is. I can't imagine Paul won't tell her, for a couple of reasons. First, because of the kind of guy he is, and the type of relationship he wants to have, both with Christy and with his mom, long-term. And second, because this is a masterful piece of fiction, I can't believe this is a loose thread that Nick would leave untied. If I were a gambling man (and actually, I am!), I'd say that Christy will disagree with Paul's contention that this isn't cheating.

I really admire Beth. Because a person has to be very special before she will have sex with him. Yes, she did have oral sex with some other guys but in the whole Summer camp story, there were only three guys who had intercourse with her. Her husband David, their very close friend Chris, and of course Paul. Who will be the lucky special person to be the fourth?

Uh... you wanna read to the end. Especially the part where I wrote, "I'll post Part 3 next week, <strong>along with the usual full-story eBooks for VIPs.</strong>" (Emphasis added, of course, since you can still see the original, above.)

Nick Scipio

Nick, Is there/will there be a 'consolidated version'?