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Chapter 206

Author Note: I am going to address the many complaints I have been getting recently. First of all, I understand your frustrations and wishes for different content during this arc.

Criticism and recommendations are more than welcome, I have had that policy ever since I started writing. However, I want to be clear on one thing.

I spend hours and hours every single day so that people can read a chapter at the same time each day. What you get on Patreon is quite literally the first draft of what I write and it's not perfect and there are inconsistencies, I will be the first one to admit that.

That being said, this is not a platform for you to vent those frustrations by sending nasty messages to me via PM or just being overall toxic on Patreon Review services. That's not something I am okay with. While I don't particularly enjoy the paragraph-long complaints, at least most of them aren't outright hostile.

I don't need to see someone calling me a POS writer whenever I open up Patreon. It makes wanting to write very difficult and for the past couple of days, I haven't got much of anything done.

It's definitely not everyone, far from it. However, it is a large enough number that I feel I need to address this before it continues. To those of you who might not enjoy it, but are still being respectful, I promise you I will do my very bestest to continue improving as a writer and hopefully write a compelling story that will make you smile.

I'm sorry for my rant, but I felt like it needed to be done. I hope you enjoy!

***

Reinera POV

Reinera woke up in a daze. However, after a few moments, she was able to get her bearings. A quick glance at the room had her feeling confused.

The first thing she noticed was the enchanted barrier, isolating her in the stone room she was in. It was slightly damp and a little bit musky. As she slowly woke up the memories started rolling in.

She had been kidnapped... again. 

It was a bit embarrassing to say, but this wasn’t the first time she had been kidnapped before. It was somewhat of a normal occurrence at this point in her life.

It almost made her want to laugh now that it happened again.

Although, the most ironic part about it was that it wasn’t even because she was a princess. The people who had snatched her didn’t seem to have any clue about her identity.

This time it seemed these people kidnapped her in order to ransom her back to her noble parents. 

The joke was on them though. How matter how much digging they did, they wouldn’t be able to find what house she belonged to.

In fact, their inability to do so would only prolong her isolation until they were able to figure out who to contact. But it wasn’t that bad to be fair. There was even an actual room and a bed provided for her, the last time she had been kidnapped, she had to sleep on the hard floor in a cage.

Sadly, she didn’t get to enjoy the quietness for as long as she wanted.

Several minutes after she woke up, she heard the door of the room open. And a man with his face completely covered entered with a confident stride.

Unlike her attackers, this man wasn’t a Tier 3. In front of her stood a genuine Tier 4.

These weren’t just common thugs at this point. Anyone who had a Tier 4 within their ranks were people with some kind of backing or connections. 

“What is your name?” The man suddenly asked her. His voice was surprisingly soft. It was gentle like drops of water hitting a glass window.

She didn’t say a word to him. The less information she provided the more time she would have to figure out how she was going to get out of something like this. 

The biggest issue was that, unlike prior times, her family and their retainers weren’t actively looking for her. They were still probably too busy finding out where she had been teleported.

Now, she was kidnapped by some unknown group in a town that she didn’t even know where it was in relation to Heston. Not to mention, that they had already taken her storage ring.

The only person who she could hope would find her was Julius.

Normally, relying on Tier 2 to help her escape from a den of criminals who were all Tier 3 and even a person who was Tier 4, would be a pipedream. However, she had learned better than to underestimate Julius.

A part of her wanted for him to save her, while another was secretly hoping that he wouldn’t, it would be safer for him if he didn't. But she knew he would try. That was just the type of person he was.

The man kept on trying to ask her questions, but she refused to even look at him. Instead, she kept looking at the empty space on the wall.

The man didn’t get outwardly irritated at her lack of response and once it became obvious that she had no intention of saying anything, he just left as quietly as he came.

***

Julius POV

After way too much pointless arguing, Elder Han finally gave in. It seemed that even whatever grudges he held against the royal family, weren’t enough to prevent the old man from helping him.

According to Elder Han, this group operated out of several locations in Stonewall.

One of them was surprisingly, but also somewhat not surprisingly, one of the local lords. 

However, Elder Han was pretty confident that they wouldn’t take a kidnapped girl to the lord’s manor. It would be too damning if something were to happen and people were to find out that one of the local lords was kidnapping young children.

Thus, Elder Han told him of the other locations she was most likely in.

As the old man was telling Julius in detail about the locations of these hideouts, Julius was confused. He asked the old man why he hadn’t done anything about these people if he knew so much about them. 

It wasn’t like the old man didn’t have the strength to do anything about it. Julius still didn’t know just how powerful Elder Han was, but he was confident it wasn’t an insignificant amount of strength.

However, Elder Han said to Julius, that sometimes it was necessary to keep certain criminal organizations in place. 

The old codger’s point of view was that there would always be some element of crime within society. It was inevitable. However, there were ways to control said crime. And in his experience, the most difficult times were when there was a vacuum of power.

This void prompted many other people to try and take its place. This led to lots of bloody conflict and unpredictable groups forming.

Julius understood it, he didn’t necessarily agree with everything the old man said, but he could comprehend what he was trying to explain to him. 

Sometimes it was better to have an enemy you know.

While Julius managed to convince the old man to help him, he wasn’t able to actually get the old man to come along. That was a bit too much of a stretch.

It would have been easier, but Julius was just glad the old man had even helped at all. It really seemed like he didn’t like the royal family. Julius could only imagine why that was.

“Which one should I look at first?” He asked himself aloud.

As he left Elder Han, he had to come up with some sort of plan, but there were just too many unknown factors he realized. So instead, he just needed to figure out where he would head first. 

After some thought, he decided to head toward the closest one and set off in a hurry.

After all, he had a princess to rescue.

***

The first two were a bust. He wasn’t able to sense anyone except for a couple of people random people hanging out inside. 

The third one though, was looking much more promising. He had already sensed more people around than the other buildings combined.

It was an abandoned warehouse on the edge of the town. There weren’t any houses or people living by. It was kind of the perfect hideout.

Julius took a lot of precautions. He paid extra attention to suppress his aura and any mana he was emanating. He also chose to wear an entirely black outfit. Face covering and all. It was at this time that he really missed his black face covering from Dante. The one he was currently wearing wasn’t nearly as comfortable.

Perhaps, when he got back to Heston, he would ask the cranky crafter to make another for him. Maybe bribe him with some treats or threaten to tell his niece if he didn't. She liked Julius and would have his back.

He softly snuck around the warehouse, controlling his kinetic energy, so that each footstep was as silent as possible.

As he got closer, he was able to sense more people who were coming inside and out of the warehouse. There were at least half a dozen of them. 

However, what really got his attention was the empty void he detected in the building. It sort of reminded him of when Dante removed himself from his spatial perception, but larger.

He suspected it was some sort of spatial isolation barrier, that prevented any teleportation.

It was kind of like the ones that were set up at Goldencrest, but this was way less subtle. But it also prevented Julius, from being able to sense what was going on inside of this space. And that was annoying.

While he hadn’t been able to find Reinera yet, it would be a pretty good guess to say that she was within that barrier.

He needed to find out more about what was inside, which also meant he needed to get closer. So with mindful steps, he carefully snuck past the people and peeked around without being noticed.

Second time today that I am acting like a thief, he mused to himself.

When he got near, he finally saw what the barrier looked and felt like from up close. 

It was basically an enchanted barrier that contained the entire internal space of the warehouse, with inscriptions running up along the wall.

His biggest problem was that he didn’t know how he was going to get past the barrier.

He had no idea if the barrier would detect his presence if he walked past it. Although, he was expecting something like that, otherwise what was the use of a barrier?

However, there must have been a way for the other people to enter. Julius had seen several people walk through a doorway, that was covered by the barrier with no problem. The issue was how was he going to do it.

So for the next hour or so, he just sat in a dark corner and observed.

He watched as people came in and out of the barrier, with no issues. It was only after a very close inspection that he noticed something.

It was fast and he had been overlooking it this entire time, but there was a flash of mana the second they entered the barrier.

It took another several looks at it before he was confident, but once he was, he was able to see it clearly.

The moment these people would pass through the barrier, a charge of mana would activate from something within their pockets or on their person.

Julius suspected it was something like the access card to the rifts he got from Lord Lagos, but this time for entry.

Now that he had a lead of what he needed to get in order to enter, he just needed to figure out how he was going to get his hands on one.

The most obvious choice was to follow a person who was leaving and ambush them. Once he took care of them he would steal their access card and be able to enter on his own.

I guess I kind am a thief this time around, he realized with a chuckle.

He couldn’t really think of a better plan, so that was what he went with.

Although he waited for a long time already, he would have to do some more waiting.

This time, he would be keeping an eye out for anyone leaving or anyone who was isolated.

Eventually, he believed he spotted his victim. There was a person who had exited the barrier and who was now leaving the abandoned warehouse, back to their home or to a bar. 

They, like all of the rest of the people, were wearing black masks. That meant he didn’t get to see their face, but he could tell that they were a female.

The fact they were a female made him pause for a moment. It wasn’t that he had a problem with hitting women.

Okay, that came out wrong.

He was just surprised to see a woman involved in what is a kidnapping of a young girl. He would have thought that women had higher standards. Men were idiots, so he could understand why these men chose to be criminal scum but to see a female criminal scum was kind of unexpected.

Or perhaps that is just me being naive.

Regardless, he needed to do this. So he toughened up and mentally prepared himself. 

Sorry in advance, but you have my friend and you're my best way to get her back, he apologized to the unknown woman.

So as she was walking away from the warehouse, Julius carefully followed her at a distance.

Comments

I just joined your Patreon and am loving the story including this arc!

Alex Galaitsis

Opinions are like assholes, everyone has one. If dudebro wants to pay to insult you, mute him and thank him for the money. Pretty sure that he isn't writing anything himself and has to pay money to a creator in order to insult them to feel special. Pretty pathetic of them.

Kevin O'Malley

I quite enjoy the story. I don't see why the complainer want "different content" I really enjoy it. Too many new things or people to worry about leaves me disheartened as it makes it more difficult for me to keep track of. I really enjoy your balance! The people introduced are important enough to julius to be remembered. I really love the way you do skills and levels. A major problem most LitRPG stories have is that so many skills rack up that it's hard to remember everything. Your story also involves more than skills, I love the deep dive of mana manipulation and how it can be used and experimented with outside of skills. I also love the pacing of how the magic system is introduced. Building up the reader's knowledge in a way that doesn't overwhelm. Hinting at what will come in future Tiers while getting is comfortable with the stuff we are getting at current tiers is an excellent way of putting an idea into the reader's minds while they get to understand the current stuff, like with aura and Concepts, and there is the references to Domains. I like the hard grind training sprees, the relaxing, the exploring of this world and the exploration of mana and skills! Personally I think this story is pretty high top tier, I consider it on par with Primal Hunter! If you ever turn this series into books I would buy them!

FoxTheorem

Don't stress about the hater, your doing great and it's always a goal to improve! Tftc

PikaAndrew

How you handle hecklers is of course up to you but Elon Musk did it fantastic when he thanked a blue checkmark heckler for his/ her 12 $.

P.R. Bakker

I also quietly enjoy the story. I think sometimes people get attached to a story thinking that this time for sure, it will be precisely the story they are dreaming of. But of course their favorite story is specific to them. So as soon as the story diverges from their expectations, they start lecturing. Don't worry. Just take the win of having made them care.

Carsten Bak Larsen

I think the main reason people complain is because they are invested. So author just needs to see "invested" "invested" "invested" "invested" "invested" "invested" and call it winning. Think about it. People complain about Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings. I don't read great works of art (Voltaire, Dostoevsk, etc) or anything but I guarantee people complain about that too. You know who nobody complains about? Authors who don't have an audience invested enough to complain. Tldr: We complain because it is SO good we get attached.

R. Maxwell Steele

I think this is my first time in the comments. Let me state that I'm here because I enjoy the story. Otherwise, I'd be waiting on RR for the free release. That said, I'd probably keep that in mind for the complainers as well. They're buying your content instead of another author's. It doesn't entitle them to abuse but it should help motivate you.

Fozzy

I will be honest I am enjoying the change of pace quite a lot, the story seems to be moving a lot quicker now then when we was at the academy and we get to explore the world a bit more so win win really.

Josh Smith

Very good story. While not a total fan of what's going on right now, I am very happy with the story overall and in all honesty it's one of my favorite "system" type worlds. So I'm sorry that people have been being rude and I hope that slows down. But those with complaints will always be louder than those without.

jzpresto

Your story is one of my top 5 in all honesty. Probably even top 3. I support your work and genuinely cannot wait for more chapters. My only complaint is about something that's more me than you, that I have to wait for more after I've reached the end of the current chapter lol. Keep up the good work and I'll always be reading!

Jayson J

I'm silent but I support your work, I like it so I read it. Positivity in a world of negativity is key so please stay positive and don't let the haters bring you down😁

Markel Creek

Don't worry about it Ryn!! There are many of us who support regardless of if we like the arc or not. We are committed to this story and thank you for your patience and are overjoyed to walk this journey with you. There will always be detractors. Keep doing what you're doing!

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

I’m of the opinion there will always be arcs people will not like. We just like what we like. Don’t let people push your to write something you don’t want to.

Tucker Glick

TFTC! Really appreciate your writing and the journey of this story! Oh baby Julius is about to fuck up a tier 4 for touching his princess 😭 GET EM JULIUS, STEAL THEIR KEYS AND A PRINCESS HEART

Zach

How dare you write so much and give such good consistent chapters. You are making the other writers look bad. Shame. Shaaaaame. (Please keep writing, it's my fix)

Derrick McDowell

Idk who can hate on this story it's great fuck the haters

Justin garhartt

I love this whole story, otherwise I wouldn’t be here, and the latest Arc is great. 😊

Lori

I totally agree with this you should block these people! https://support.patreon.com/hc/en-us/articles/207982093-Everything-you-need-to-know-about-Blocking-a-member

Read Isekai

Perfect a weak Tier 4 just waiting to give Julius a challenge :)

nicolas

I eagerly anticipate your writings among the authors I support. Your nuanced storytelling sets you apart and keeps me coming back. Fucthehaters

DOCORK

Some people don't know boundaries and vent. But you are chill and distanced 😎

Sambor P

Just wanted to let you know that I think your doing a great job and that I appreciate all the work you put in.

Ryan Berends

A fellow lunch reader!

Bloodorange17

Thanks for the chapters! I don’t usually comment much, but I feel it’s necessary today. Ignore the haters, this is the internet people will be mean because they can and there are usually no repercussions. Are there times when I’m frustrated with the plot, characters, and direction of the story? Of course, but that happens with all things, books, TV shows, movies, my life (lol). So ignore the haters (maybe even ban them if you can). Just continue creating an awesome story and you'll continue to have fans that support you with positivity.

SpaceGoddess76

"It could be argued that Julius isn't a child, but living as a child for so long and being treated as a child for so long, plus the literal chemistry of his body, are sure to take a toll." In addition to this, when Julian's soul was pulled to this world he merged with Julius so he's actual a combined adult and child placed in the body of a child and treated like a child.

Hamfist

I read this story everyday at lunch and love it. It's your story, tell it how you want. Let the complainers go write their own.

Digital

I look forward to reading your writing every day. Thank you for the chapter.

Derek

Let's be honest the internet makes people complain about everything, scan it for useful stuff and ignore the rest

ebonscar

I'm sorry but I disagree. I was clear multiple times that these were my opinions and were what I personally thought. The reference to "we" and "us" was obviously towards other commenters from previous chapters with similar thoughts, not in reference to those who disagree. I've read what I've written multiple times and I don't believe there is any point that can be considered rude or nasty - at most, it can be considered blunt. But I don't think there is a need to treat people like children and flounce around the issues. I've been clear in what I think the problem points are - anything else would not be constructive. I understand the author has received multiple comments and DMs with nasty and toxic language, and I do empathise with them. But... that wasn't me. I do hope the author is feeling better, the same as many others have stated in their comments. But I'm not going to change my thoughts and feedback on the chapters because of that.

Ethyria

I think it was the “we” and “us readers language. And instead of saying some IS bad, you could say “I think why I didn’t like this part was” etc. I do think your language was not the nicest, you can supply your constructive criticism but I would just be mindful of your wording, be mindful that you are just one opinion and there are many, and that this is a first draft. Especially when the author has just voiced how shitty the aggressive comments are making them feel, try easing off a little bit please. Be kind/grateful

George McKibbin

I think maybe you are feeling like some of these plot points weren’t “earned”, like little hints and clues leading up to it to make it feel almost inevitable? Like instead of instantly being captured, you could have a simultaneous POV of her exploring the city, and maybe she feels someone is following her, doing various things to build up to getting kidnapped. What we got was the fact she chose to wear nicer clothes, and the guards at the gate but maybe needed a bit more to feel like it was properly “earned”. With a good editor that’s stuff the author will likely hopefully in later when going to book form, but as you say, this is still quite an enjoyable story, especially for a daily released draft ^_^

George McKibbin

I don’t mind the suspense! I’m sure some brief POV switches would alleviate the tension but the issue is largely due to people waiting for the daily chapters to progress, when someone comes across this arc without the restriction of daily waiting, I doubt they’ll be so annoyed. Tension/anticipation are a powerful tool ^_^. Love this story, you’re working so hard to release this many chapters (much higher quality drafts than some other authors’ Patreons). Sending you all the hugs/good vibes

George McKibbin

Money speaks louder than words. Everyone on here enjoys your story enough to pay to read it. That mean we all actually believe your a great writer.

Steven

I never criticize tangents like this, because real life isn't so neat (I might get irritated if something is particularly dragging, but that's different). Things happen. A lot of people seem to be forgetting that the two of them are CHILDREN, so of course they're making stupid mistakes. It could be argued that Julius isn't a child, but living as a child for so long and being treated as a child for so long, plus the literal chemistry of his body, are sure to take a toll. Personally, I LOVE tangents that come out of nowhere, because that's literally what surprises are. They come out of nowhere. It's accurate to real life. You're not going to find foreshadowing in your real life. I also love loose threads. Not everything can be tied up neatly, and I don't think they should be. My advice for you on this situation is Julius rescues the princess, but they don't dismantle the criminals of do anything else with them. They just leave, and everything remains the same for this town. Hell, it might setup future interactions if they're not conveniently taken care of, or maybe they affect some other character down the road, adding an interesting twist that we can all go, "Oooh, that makes sense." Maybe they can even not learn the local noble's name, or even the town's name, and Julius AND Reinera could befriend the noble's kid at Goldencrest. That would be hilarious.

Kyfe

Honestly, your story is the best one, I’ve had the pleasure of reading this year. Ignore the naysayers and idiots! It’s your story and it’s a great compelling and fun read - keep it up!

Alexander Zeheter

TFTC You're doing great, ignore the hate, just remember these people aren't writing cause they can't and you're creating a great story. I'm enjoying all of it, am I hating some of it, sure but that's because I'm getting stressed reading it (which to me is a sign I'm invested and you are writing it well, cause I am emotionally invested) and just want everything to turn out great for the MC, but if that were the case it would end up being a boring story. Your writing quality is improving every chapter. Keep making your story.

MultiConism

It’s a good story, and it’s your story. It’s regularly on popular this week on RR still. People like it. Tell it how you envision it. I enjoy reading all of it, even if I rant about a new side quest taking us off on another adventure I still enjoyed reading the side quest. We will get where I want to go eventually and I’ll enjoy reading it until we get there as well. Keep up the good work. TYFTC

gray matter

This was basically what I was gonna say. When we as readers leave feedback we obviously think we're right and maybe we are sometimes. But if we knew better we'd write our own stories but instead we're reading yours. That says a lot right there.

L Pedersen

I mean... I'm not. I'm speaking for me. And to be clear, it's not that I necessarily hate it; it's just been a frustrating and rather pointless event - instead of prioritising their safety and journey home, Julius got randomly distracted by principles he's never demonstrated before, then got distracted by a random old man and training a bunch of orphans. Meanwhile, the princess wandered off on her own and, within minutes, got identified and kidnapped by a large group of Tier 3s. Tier 3s who just so happen to be part of an organized crime group who regularly kidnap noble children who apparently often visit this poor, crime-ridden, backwater town. Forgive me if I find the scenario somewhat unbelievable. But even so, I don't care much about the events themselves - what really bothers me is that Julius has behaved like a robot this whole time. There is no sense of his emotions at all; he doesn't seem to be affected by anything, the princess, the assassination attempt, the kidnapping, or the old man. Actually, I tell a lie. He did feel bad about harming a kidnapper. Look, I'm not saying anything bad about the author. I wouldn't do that. They've written an enjoyable story and are able to consistently produce chapters almost daily - they should be proud of that. But compared to the rest of the story, this mini-arc is a miss. Main issues: - Need to display more emotion from the characters, particularly Julius, whether it be fear, frustration, anger, or whatever. It's impossible to relate with him or understand him if all we see are his actions. - I think it best to change how the princess gets kidnapped. Perhaps she can have her own little quest similar to Julius teaching the orphan's - maybe she sees some injustice like the corrupt guards, tries to be a hero and messes up. At least this way she'd show her personality and not just be a plot device. - It's hard to say whether to tweak the old man because I don't know your plans for him. But if I were Julius, I wouldn't ever want to deal with a person again, if, at Tier6+, they wont even fulfil a promised favor that would cost them pretty much nothing.

Ethyria

Just want to say, each chapter's writing technique has been better than the last. There will always be sections or topics people don't like; I for one have been one of the ones that thought this section dragged but there's a very good reason I am still subscribed and paying for content: I think you as a writer and this story are worth it!

BlackMarch

You would be surprised how often they keep subscribing, many people even threaten to unsub to try to get an author the change the story then stay subbed 🤦‍♂️

Read Isekai

Everything could be better. Patreon, my Phone, the weather, nothing is perfect. Your story is Great and you are doing Great. Dont let the downers get to you. ❤️

Anders Nordesjö

I haven’t commented before and I’ve loved the story. You were the reason I finally got on Patreon so I could support you and read ahead. Since then I’ve added a couple other favorites and I’m supporting them as well. Just because the Assholes are louder there are more people quietly enjoying your work!

Chris Seagraves

Critisim is to be listened to or disregarded at your discresion as the writer. Disregard any painfully negative hate. If you find you can't then they'll be gone in 30-ish days.

ReadingObsessed

TFTC and that really sucks youre getting hate. On the bright side, these losers are paying you monthly to send you mean messages online

777777777777

Tftc! I've been enjoying this story a lot! This arc seems fine too? I don't see what people have against it. I'll keep pointing out typos as I see them, but I'm enjoying the relatively slow pace of this story.

mechanizedbush

I really enjoy the story! Even the slice of life stuff :). Thanks for the chapter!

focus2x

Not really advice nor am I trying to insult you or change how you write, I get that you have an idea for how this ends and that it’s your story. This is just me putting my thoughts out into the comments just ignore it. I just wish that instead of her getting kidnapped she met up with Julius. It would have been interesting seeing them teach the kids and seeing the old man and Princess interact could have been interesting. Not only that but shown more of her personality. The beef between this cheeky but bitter old man who hates royalty and the princess who has no idea who he is and why he keeps talking shit might have been funny too. It could have been a nice little slice of life in the characters lives, while they interact with this little orphanage the princess tries to keep the fact that she can call for help whenever she wants from Julius. Then when he eventually finds out the old man could’ve went “i ToLd YoU sO bUt NoBoDy LiStEnS tO LItTle oLd Me” The drama between would they stay friends would’ve been delicious because this is like the second time she’s lied to him. Instead it’s another damsel in distress arc which could work well but it just came out of nowhere. Why do you need to rob kidnap noble children when you have a stable income as guards and Rank 4 you’re already strong you can find work almost anywhere. Not only that how have they kept getting away with this the only person helping is a lord in this backwater village and your kidnapping every Random noble you see. We know for a fact they aren’t investigating first they saw expensive clothes and went for it with no hesitation. Even ignoring the fact that they managed to kidnap the princess of the empire the live in what are the chances they haven’t end up getting someone they can’t deal with. They aren’t being careful and there is a ton of powerful people In their world ( probably ). I mean I don’t have problems with this arc, I enjoy reading it every time a new character comes out, but the story is starting to feel like it’s losing whatever made me want to pay for Patreon so i didn’t have to wait for new chapters.

Golden monkey

Thank you Author🤩🤩🤩

Achis74

You are putting yourself out there on the Internet. That is never easy and you deserve all the praise for the courage that requires. Don't burn yourself out. Remember why you wanted to do this in the first place and focus on the good. Don't feed the trolls and all that! Your doing great so far and I love the ideas behind the story. Execution will come with time and those of us enjoying the story now are looking past that to what you are doing right.

Aki Foxtail

I just want to let you know that I very much appreciate this story and your work. This is far and away the story that is the most consistent in uploading and volume. I look forward to the chapter drops everyday. I also love every chapter and feel like this arc is going great. Please keep up the the great work and fuck the haters.

Matt w Lichens

Seconded. Of the two dozen stories I’m following on RR, you are only the second for whom I’ve made the jump to Patreon. It infuriates me that these people feel entitled to trash on an author who's creative work isn't going the direction they want. When I find myself no longer caring for a story I just stop reading it… quietly. All those assholes accomplish is ruining it for the rest of us when authors get demoralized and stop writing a story we still love While I’ll admit that I was initially disappointed to see the action and skill gains slow down, I’ve come to realize that Julius was starting to become a 1 dimensional girding machine. I really appreciate seeing you take the time to round out not only his character but also some of the others and the setting. I particularly enjoy the POV’s of Grace and the street thugs watching Julius fight. It really drives home just how incredibly talented he is compared to the average person in a way that we weren’t seeing when our only point of reference was his spars against his other friends. I’m sorry you have to deal with this harassment. Hopefully Patreon and RR allow you to ban the people that aren't treating you correctly. If you need to take some time to get your head back into a good place, please do. Those of us that are loving the story will be here when you get back. Take care and thank you for the amazing story!

Michael M

I have been loving the story so far, and think you're doing a great job. Let me give my opinion on the last few chapters. Individually, they are great and very well written. Having binged a bunch of chaps, i actually feel like the quality of your writing has improved noticeably. However, having the princess get kidnapped and then cutting to Julius messing around with random throwaway side characters is pretty frustrating for the readers. It just is a totally different vibe, and since the kids dont feel important or lasting, seeing Julius spend time with them doesnt sit well while Reinara is possibly getting spirited further away, beaten, or worse. However, there is a very simple fix. Just change the order of the chapters!:) Put the reinara getting kidnapped chapter after the training with the kids. You can do a flashback style like *3 Hours Earlier* when Julius discovers her missing. Easy peasy. Overall a minor blip in a great story. Even if you kept it the way it is, i think if people weren't waiting for new chapters it would be less frustrating, and it's still a great story. As for the longer arc, I've been loving it.

Thaabit Rivertree

I apologise if this looks like a criticism I was hoping to be constructive and point out what I think is an oversight. I believe that "How matter how much digging" should be "No Matter how much digging"

Oliver Reilly

Thanks for the chapter. Keep up the good work. wasn’t the first time she had been kidnapped before. => wasn’t the first time she had been kidnapped.

Raymond Mouton

Thoroughly enjoying the story. Sorry some people are immature, inconsiderate and unreasonably hostile. Keep up the good work and I look forward to future chapters.

Rusty G.

Haven’t said anything so far, so perhaps one recommendation - for the web novel format it would be better to have Reinera POV where she gets kidnapped closer to this chapter. Even with chapter frequency, many people will be unhappy. In general I think this web novel still fulfills my expectations, however I would be happier if some plot transitions were not so “forced”, the kidnapping is just latest example, but there are many more. For example princess getting to know Julius, Julius various failures like him getting attacked in a shop by random T3 because justification was needed to give him access to rifts, or injuring his soul situation. All of those felt awkward and forced, because all these situations had either MC acting dumb all of a sudden or the situation that occurred was so unlikely to happen that when you put them next to each other it is obvious it is simply a tool to force plot in a certain direction.

Petr Pavelka

Maybe you hate it but don't try speaking for the rest of us

Read Isekai

😤🙌🫡

Robert Reilly

I just don't understand the point of this arc. We've all read these sort of damsel story arcs in the past and they are universally hated, so I can't understand why you've written it. But it is your novel as others have said, and perhaps there is a payoff later on. Perhaps this is your setup for character growth, though I would consider it rather forced. I think where this really falls flat is Julius. He has just accepted all of this - the princess being stupidly kidnapped, the old man being useless and petty - this tier 6+ doesn't even have the decency to honour a favour he promised. Isn't Julius annoyed? Why is he just rolling over like some doormat? Why did you gloss over their argument? Doesn't he share the same frustrations as us readers? Honestly, at this stage he doesn't even feel like a character, just a tool to reach where you want the story to go. As a reader, I'm frustrated with the actions of all the characters in this arc. What I need to see is their emotions; I need to feel vindicated by them because surely they must be frustrated too. I need that outlet, otherwise all I can do is bottle it up and complain in the comments.

Ethyria

Bro your writing has too many merits to get bogged down in small inconsistencies that come with every first draft! I’m honestly surprised that people find fault with your work b/c I CAN’T get enough of it

Robert Reilly

There is a difference between "short fuse short complaint", "wall of text as if you committed injustice against the world". The former in the extreme case will result to personal insults in slew of lacking the ability to properly convey themselves. The latter will be holding a deeper, longer grudge that has now surfaced (or so they'd believe). These people communicate too many words for simple feelings that they've amplified and are almost just as lacking in communication.

Arrogant Savant

Thank you for the chapter! Your story is incredible! I don’t understand how people could be so rude, the whole purpose of us supporting your work is because we want to read more of it! If they don’t like it they don’t have to read it! Just know that you will always have supporters.

World_Wolf

This chapter addressed a lot of my issues. I should have been more patient! Thank you

Kevin McKinney

Hey, good stuff. Seriously! Not all steps on the epic journey go according to plan. Please keep writing and fuck the haters! Sorry if I came across as one of them.

Kevin McKinney

Don't let the bad eggs get you down. I thoroughly look forward to reading the chapters when they post. It's a highlight of my day and always bring me a smile. Thank you for your hard work and dedication. I am proud to be a patreon supporter.

Galaxyace1

I love your writing, those people messaging and complaining are insane. 5/5 story thanks for the chapter.

Rowsdower

Some people just want to get to the destination with no care for the journey 🤦‍♂️ It's a luxury in an of itself that you do 6 releases a week! Even if this is a slower arc we get through it like 2x faster than with most other authors. Plus it seems the pace of this arc is somewhat intentional as julius is bottlenecking at the peak of tier 2, I assume there will be a large release relatively shortly and everyone's ocd can be released I'm loving the story so far ❤️

Read Isekai

Enjoying the story.

Aaron

If i didnt like the story i wouldn't keep reading it and i think the final say on how the story progress should be on the author himself, critisism are fine if its to improve but other people just don't get this and basically demands like their ideas should be priority through talkin sht Ps. I love how the story is progressing, the no1 reason why i subscribed

UnknownERRoR

I appreciate you and your writing good sir! Thank you for what you do 😀

Troy

I voiced my criticism before but I think I’ve done so fairly nicely- at least I hope so. I firmly believe criticism can help especially when it comes with suggestions but i absolutely abhor people who are plainly insulting and dismissive of the work of others. You put in a lot of work and i appreciate it. I loved the story so far and will surely be back for more.

Jana

Wow people do that?! Well thank you for sharing and thank you for your wonderful writing and story. I also appreciated the multi week chapter postings as well. I love this story and personally, I am really enjoying the growth and character building/learning of most of the character's including the main one. I also like the different POVs frequently sprinkled in and I can't wait to see what happens to Julius. I do wish there was a little bit more action sometimes BUT I also feel like it's coming too and the story arc is really building here.

CNeep

The fact that anyone is commenting so negatively that you have to reply to it, is ridiculous. I know it’s hard to ignore negativity, but there are plenty of people who enjoy your writing, so I hope you see the positive too. I look forward to 11Am every day lol

Zebrababies

People are horrible and It doesn’t matter if there are 100 people who disagree with there are 1000 that love you and your chapters are amazing

Doodleparkave

Sorry if any of my comments crossed the line. I don't think I did, but I've been wrong before.

Sean

No matter what anyone says you have maintained a consistent and impressive standard for quite some time now. There are certainly areas for improvement, but it would be inane to believe it could be otherwise. Even Brandon Sanderson still expresses his frustrations at his own writing quality at times. Critics will critique, but you're doing great! If you weren't, you wouldn't have patrons

aNGL

tftc , love the current arc.

Cesar Machuca

Thanks for the chapter! Also I'm certain that negative people are the minority and that almost everyone is here because we enjoy your content.

Arietare

Tyftc! Fuck the haters i really enjoy this series

Carl Skinnars

Thank you for the chapter. I just wanted to say how much I appreciate the effort and passion you put into your work. Not every chapter will resonate with everyone, but that doesn't take away from the dedication and creativity you consistently bring. Please don’t let the negativity overshadow the joy and value your writing brings to so many of us. Keep pushing forward—you’ve got fans who truly admire and support you!

webolive

It was and will always be a privilege to support you on your journey as a author Ryn. I understand your frustration, nasty comments don’t have a place here. I love your story and i am grateful for your hard work!!

Andi Scherndl

I think you are doing very well with this! That’s the reason I came over here from RR, because I liked it so much I wanted more and to support what you’re doing!

Quentin Cozzi

I'm sorry people are being so rude to you over your story. I'm really enjoying it anyway

Creative Username

Aye man, you do you. You can never make everyone happy. TYFTC!

dethrothes

Fuck those people

deus vault

Thanks for the chapter!

Quentin Cozzi


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