Kartoon Warz #4 update
Added 2025-07-18 18:26:03 +0000 UTCA lot of text in them, isn't? Don't worry, it's just do give some background for the action. After all, you all are here for the plot, right?
PS- And tell me about the spelling errors! I will make a nice zip file in the end of the chapter.
Comments
You are right. The original colorist used a darker tone in the 3 first issue. I kinda noticied that now. I will correct this when I fix the text.
ReddyHeart
2025-08-04 12:17:31 +0000 UTCSorry was Marion always that colour? I thought her skin was darker.
dbjwhite@hotmail.co.uk
2025-08-04 08:51:07 +0000 UTCYeah, well, the breasts are in the way...
ReddyHeart
2025-07-21 18:18:30 +0000 UTCUnrelated to your dialogue question, but one thing I always find funny about the fourth panel is, that I know the intention is she kicked her in the chin with that whirling kick, but the placement of the impact makes me always think kicked her tits off the ground instead XD
Aleksandor
2025-07-20 04:59:33 +0000 UTCThanks! It helps a lot!
ReddyHeart
2025-07-19 13:00:29 +0000 UTCSure, here are the ones I found: First page, third panel: Should be "This is LOW even for you, Kengo!" First page, fifth panel: Should be "You pissed off the wrong people!" Second page, first panel: I think "I've had it with that "Rich Girl" routine!" is the proper wording. Second page, second panel: "Broken ass" would be the correct conjugation, but it's not an insult I've seen often in English. Only in Spanish. Third page, first panel: "a" is missing. It should be "You don't have a clue on what's really happening to you." Third page, third panel: "I like your way of thinking!"; It can either be "And what if you had all the means to make them happen?" or "And do you have all the means to make them happen?" Third page, fourth panel: "It really sounds like one!" Third page, sixth panel: You can use either "Well, I tried" or "Well, at least I tried" Fourth page, first panel: "But where did that thing come from?" Hope this helps. PS: I like where this is going!
Niccab
2025-07-18 22:15:08 +0000 UTC
