Unexpected Date
Added 2023-03-29 00:45:29 +0000 UTCUnexpected Date
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I'm not normally one for OC stories, but this really was fun. I like Natalia's character development and how even at the end of the story, it remains hopeful.
Avid Reader
2024-12-19 00:01:29 +0000 UTCI recently gave this story a second read and I just wanted to applaud you. The harem fics are fun but I find that stories that focus on a primary pairing stand out more and stand up better to revisits. I love that Natalie’s back story has enough hints to flesh out the character but also has enough ambiguity that I want to read more. I don’t know if this plot line holds your interest as a creator, but if it does I would eagerly devour it!
Nova Sana
2024-11-21 20:02:42 +0000 UTCYes please I think it is the start of a great series.
matt tombaugh
2024-06-24 19:31:04 +0000 UTCThis is awesome would love to see more
A
2023-10-27 21:16:59 +0000 UTCHopefully we get another chapter. Was great!
Katzzzz
2023-06-12 19:10:51 +0000 UTCWould love to see more of this
Salvage48
2023-04-26 21:43:43 +0000 UTCWould love more chapters on this story
dault3883
2023-04-20 18:06:06 +0000 UTCA quite enjoyable story that definitely deserves further chapters or a sequel or three. I would love to see this storyline continue and develop. If Natalia was open to it, I'd love to see Fleur and HErmione join them.
Cateagle
2023-04-10 20:11:49 +0000 UTCI’ve actually never commented on a post before, but I feel like I need to here. This one-shot was absolutely amazing and I feel like if you turned it into a full blown story that it could be one of your best and most popular yet. Please consider continuing this story.
Perseus999
2023-04-05 23:52:03 +0000 UTCThis is a great story and like many others I would like to see this one continue
Stephen Jennings
2023-04-05 01:38:56 +0000 UTCI like most of the comment section would love to see this turned into a full story. Natalia is fantastic!
Charles Peck
2023-04-02 23:50:01 +0000 UTCI definitely want to see more of Natalia with Harry
Draco Pendragon
2023-04-01 02:05:49 +0000 UTCnatalia is my favorite of your oc's so far she seems like a fun edition.
octave
2023-03-30 04:38:20 +0000 UTCCurse Breaking family, I forsee them meeting Harry over the summer, some how abducting Sirius getting him a international trial, getting Harry's side of the story, checking out the scar that seems to never heal and so much more.
Josh Robbins
2023-03-30 04:13:21 +0000 UTCThis was great and I wish it were a mini series. Glad to see an OC and hermoine got some love in a non overly sexual way
Gamerdood
2023-03-29 19:35:18 +0000 UTCI actually think this should be a series. Natalia is a well thought out and awesome character. Plz do more. This story is interesting.
Salvage48
2023-03-29 15:14:57 +0000 UTCI wanted to mix things up.
Professor Quill
2023-03-29 15:03:56 +0000 UTCVery good. Wasn’t sure if the initial prompt would work, but it very much did.
Stonebrow
2023-03-29 15:00:02 +0000 UTCFantastic as Always!
Brutus
2023-03-29 13:07:15 +0000 UTCThis deserves a sequel! I can’t help but feel like Harry would be the only man Fleur and Hermione would ever accept and love as a man and love interest. I would love to read how Natalia’s family will react to the news of her dating Harry and how the family would treat him. Would they play a major role in defeating Voldemort and his death eaters? :3
KristofferXxXxX
2023-03-29 12:28:41 +0000 UTCAbsolutely live it
Ben Luber
2023-03-29 11:59:11 +0000 UTCAnother fantastic story. Hopefully a chapter 2
Peter Howe
2023-03-29 11:01:37 +0000 UTCI love this story hopefully there's a part 2 coming up or a full story
Stephen Jennings
2023-03-29 09:09:19 +0000 UTCLove it. Hopefully a part two is in the works
Jas
2023-03-29 06:56:08 +0000 UTCgood new story really enjoyed. hoping for another chapter but that's up to you. i kept laughing when natalia kept saying dios mio.
Mugiwaraboy
2023-03-29 05:54:59 +0000 UTC10/10 is it bad I want a follow up or some sort of continuation or wrap up?
Josh Robbins
2023-03-29 05:40:59 +0000 UTCShouldn't it be "Fleur and Cedric" at the beginning? Fleur and Krum had similar sucesses. ..... Cedric’s face was burnt .... and Fleur was whipped .....
norgrim
2023-03-29 05:36:38 +0000 UTCA very nice story and we'll contained to boot. It feels like it's exactly the intended length and not like a compressed full story.
Zitronen tee
2023-03-29 05:09:24 +0000 UTCthis is great story plz dont make it a one shot its full length story material
jacob hixson
2023-03-29 04:55:09 +0000 UTCNope, I'm just too much of a perv to not let Harry get with more witches.
Professor Quill
2023-03-29 04:44:15 +0000 UTCA most excellent and enjoyable one-shot that deserves a sequel or three and I would not object to a side story of Fleur and Hermione's night.
Cateagle
2023-03-29 04:43:40 +0000 UTCNicely done. And I can't help but think you've done a really good job foresahdowing the two couples basically swinging too. Or maybe I'm just too used to your non monogamous perversities :P Brilliant oneshot!
tornadoboy
2023-03-29 04:42:10 +0000 UTCWrapped that up nicely good stand alone
J.Rogue
2023-03-29 04:32:15 +0000 UTCgreat story, kinda wished it wasn't just a one-shot
HowlerAtTheMoon
2023-03-29 04:21:29 +0000 UTCSuper merci
Bouttefeux Pierre-yves
2023-03-29 04:18:31 +0000 UTCAnother "one-shot" I want more of. Good work quill.
Wyatt131
2023-03-29 04:10:56 +0000 UTCThis is a fun chapter, I would enjoy seeing this continue.
Celexs
2023-03-29 03:37:03 +0000 UTCabsolutely love it!
Erinnyes
2023-03-29 03:29:09 +0000 UTCwondered.Is missing space “We were ever told we couldn’t,” she smirked. weren't? Even though Natalia turned away McLaggen with a negligent wave, it still both him that they would ask at all. bothered him attention,Natalia missing space Hall, harry rested Harry “Who cares?” Harry asked. “You’re happy. That’s all that matters. If you listened to what everyone else thought about you, Malfoy would’ve driven from this castle after the first week.” driven you from
Chichi son
2023-03-29 01:45:08 +0000 UTC
