"The Goodyear Blimp Fox" - Inflation/Popping
Added 2025-10-27 19:08:19 +0000 UTCThis is a story I wrote for Halloween last year I think, but somehow forgot to post it! I've actually found a couple random unposted stories that sort of got lost in my files as other notes buried them. I also saw an opportunity to alter the ending a bit to make it extra fun >:3
While preparing for a Halloween party, Reggie is visited by the vengeful ghost of his friend Tycho, who popped under questionable circumstances the year before.
Comments
I really appreciate the comment! Writing something that draws in someone not normally into the subject matter always makes me feel good about what I do. Thank you :3
IndigoRho
2025-10-30 17:33:10 +0000 UTCI normally don't like popping. I don't usually like the idea of "the end" being involved at all. Usually I like blimps to stay blimped up by the end, still intact but ready for all kinds of fun. Yet somehow, your style of writing actually gets me into it. Dunno if it's just how you describe the inflation or just how the characters are handled, but I find myself being interested even when normally popping isn't my thing. I'd still love to see more non-fatal endings, but I did want to leave my compliments for writing something I don't normally like in a way I find compelling. It speaks to your talents as a writer!
Windy3753
2025-10-30 04:39:01 +0000 UTC
