Veil - Comic Release
Added 2025-01-22 18:03:39 +0000 UTCHey all!
Here's the final version of the Veil comic that I've posted previously, I figured given the tariffs that are incoming for print in China and the amount of time I've been sitting on this that it's time to just release it!
I'm working on StarVeil and some other comics too - lots incoming!
Thank you all so much for supporting me through this, I appreciate you all, hope you like it!
Dave
Comments
Amazing! Thanks for sharing! I love how you chopped up the panels in dynamic and unique ways, and allowed the visuals to speak for themselves with the text supplying enough info to guide our imaginations further. And the backgrounds as well, like the colored borders of the pages are great with the different gradients, and the grunge texture over it all. A true work of love. I hate to be that guy but I noticed just two things: Page 6 - has his black pupil on the wrong eye compared to the other pages. Page 15 - has a typo in the text where it says "put your through" instead of "put you through". Just two tiny things I noticed when reading the book a couple times, in case you wanted to fix it before printing or whatever. I love the way you've written it and how the characters speak, the main godly sun figure having such a presence even in her manner of speech. I think page 12 is my favorite, with her eyes at the bottom contrasted with the golden people in the middle of the page. So juicy. Thanks for sharing the whole thing with us! Cant wait for more StarVeil!!
Kiptoe
2025-02-20 00:48:11 +0000 UTCHoly fuck balls Batman, this is wicked gorgeous and delightful to read. Huge congrats.
Charlie Utting
2025-01-31 05:38:26 +0000 UTCAmazing stuff as usual! Will you be printing this yourself and then selling it later on as a short comic, referring to the printer comment?
Cirilla
2025-01-24 18:25:45 +0000 UTCAbsolutely beautiful work, thankyou for sharing ♥️
D4RK
2025-01-24 02:29:06 +0000 UTCThis should be in a gallery, every page is an art piece.
Jordi Alcala
2025-01-23 21:54:39 +0000 UTCHell yeah, dude. This kicks ass. Mission accomplished in making a comic where every panel feels like a grandiose painting, and the story makes me so stoked for more Starveil
Destry Cloud
2025-01-23 14:51:30 +0000 UTCAbsolutely gorgeous Dave. You're a damn beast and a huge inspiration! Cheers and thank you for sharing!
JJcanvas
2025-01-23 10:28:49 +0000 UTCOhhhh ok.
Alfred Manzano
2025-01-23 00:45:33 +0000 UTCThis should be an animated movie!
Genesis Bayo
2025-01-23 00:25:36 +0000 UTCimporting from China from our printers would end up being super expensive
David Rapoza
2025-01-22 20:37:53 +0000 UTCI am not aware of this China tariff thing? How is this effecting the comic???
Alfred Manzano
2025-01-22 19:45:24 +0000 UTCHell yea Dave!
Alfred Manzano
2025-01-22 19:44:54 +0000 UTCWhat a pleasure to see the final comic. Thanks for posting this Dave!
YoPotato
2025-01-22 19:29:05 +0000 UTCWow.
Rauv_Art
2025-01-22 18:24:32 +0000 UTCWow amazing work as always!!!
Marcello Iozzoli
2025-01-22 18:19:30 +0000 UTCThis is beautiful! Call me a softie but I teared up a little at the end, it really resonated with me. Pages 14 and 15 are my absolute favorites their radiance is so striking and magic feels very tactile and mystical. Lettering looks great as well, it really compliments the whole aesthetic. Thank you so much for sharing it Dave, can't wait to have it on my bookshelf!
V
2025-01-22 18:18:38 +0000 UTCGreat job man! It's truly a work of art
Pablo Serrano
2025-01-22 18:18:20 +0000 UTCAmazing
Guido
2025-01-22 18:16:39 +0000 UTCSuper work Dave!
J.R. Barker
2025-01-22 18:13:33 +0000 UTCAwesome that you're releasing it on Patreon 😃 Hope you promote the hell out of it because both you and the comic totally deserve it 🫡
Sebastiaan te Pas
2025-01-22 18:09:28 +0000 UTCFinalllyyyyyyyy!!!! Edit: and well done of course 🥹
Maximilosc
2025-01-22 18:06:46 +0000 UTCHell yes!
Ronald Acosta
2025-01-22 18:05:27 +0000 UTC
