Next chapters plannings + fixes
Added 2025-07-19 12:17:29 +0000 UTCHello!
Alright, I already have an idea for the next chapter, and I'm starting to work on it today. 😎
I think you'd all enjoy reading new chapters weekly, so from now on, we’ll have one chapter per week. 🤩
If I ever need to make changes to previous chapters, I’ll let you know, so you can reread the updated version along with the new one.
Speaking of that, the first new feature will be the ability to start from any chapter you want. I believe we’ll all enjoy this one!
There are also requests for new features and bug fixes, so to balance new chapters and coding, I’ve decided to take a smoother approach to implementing everything. This way, we can stick to the one-chapter-per-week plan. I hope you don’t mind! Rest assured, I’ll be working on all bugs and new features as we go.
Have a good weekend and expect new content soon for our beloved girfriend! 😍
Comments
The third option is actually pretty good... thanks for the idea, I might rework the first/second chapter a bit to add this information. Thanks!
Roleplay Phone
2025-07-25 02:49:50 +0000 UTCI think the problem isnt that its not a slowburn(most ntr manga arnt slowburn for example) but that Emily acts more like the main girl of a slut story then an ntr/ntrs story. At least from the players perspective she is doing everything unprompted, with no hesitation, and without regard for her boyfriends feelings. Add on the fact that she is doing this with someone she supposedly dislikes and you lose the suspension of disbelief. Adding detailed intimacy between mc and emily wouldn't fix that, it would make it worse. It would make more sense if you made mc tell Emily that he was into ntrs so Emily is just doing that thinking that's what mc would want. Another option would be to reveal that Sabrina told Emily about mc's fetish and showed chats between Emily and Sabrina where Emily showed hesitation/doubt while Sabrina egged her on. A third option is you could make it so that Emily was a massive slut before meeting mc but some event between her and mc caused her to change her ways for him but her high sex drive and how busy mc has been recently could have her return to her old ways and those thoughts are the cause of mc's fetish. There are plenty of ways to keep the current pace while having the story make enough sense that people don't lose that suspension of disbelief.
ozg82889
2025-07-25 02:39:37 +0000 UTCthank you! 😍
Roleplay Phone
2025-07-23 18:36:14 +0000 UTCI discovered your stuff on itch.io, i like the writting!
Emneon_Advance
2025-07-23 13:04:57 +0000 UTC
