BoD Ch8 is up!
Added 2022-04-21 20:00:37 +0000 UTCFF: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13944923/9/Borne-of-Desire
RR: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/46050/borne-of-desire/chapter/891249/chapter-8
SB: https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/borne-of-desire-pokemon-isekai.960978/post-83702403
SV: https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/borne-of-desire-pokemon-isekai.94062/post-23758872
Ao3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/37432549/chapters/96296158
Comments
i really like the story so far, it is a nice alternative to BoC, and well written Edit (i didn't want to send it so early, dang) I have to say, Diamond/Pearl/Plantin were my first and favorite pokemon games, so i am really happy that the story plays in that part of the timeline I do have a few questions/suggestions so far: If you were to quantify Lulus Strength via a Level, what Level would that be? Is she level 30? 40? Or early 20? Since Julian has knowledge both about the world, as well as Aura etc; will he have Lulu awaken Ash's Aura early? and maybe train him? I might be wrong, but iirc Ash has a big Aura potential, and I am curious to see, where a story with that element would go On another note: Can we get a Scene next chapter, where Ash and friends speak about the fight, and Brock analyzes the pokemon, trainer, and fight? I am really curious to see what Brock would say, considering he has way more experience and is less biased
Javidom
2022-04-26 13:10:02 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter.
Fabhar
2022-04-21 20:33:49 +0000 UTC
