Took a bit longer on this one, trying to do a better job of the hands because I've been skimping on using references for them, and so many of my pictures lacked details because of it. The third panel was fun, I've been wanting to draw more dynamic shots for a while, and now was a good time to have one.
I've been going over the script, and while I could follow along with Amanda right until she leaves, I've been considering following her into town, then switching back to him for a bit before swapping back as she leaves on another adventure. The issue I was having was that once she gets to town not much else was planned to happen, so filling in the empty timespan with something was better, and this would help to tell the story so...
I'll write out a draft and then consider the options some more.