Not bothering to recall the Maelstrom, I opened my dimensional closet and retrieved the small transport I had built with Remy to move inside dungeons quickly. Since I didn’t have the cats with me, the small craft could handle taking me to Skyhold. Before lifting off I decided to contact Malik.
The aether tec...
2025-11-13 04:50:59 +0000 UTC View Post*World Sphere 231 is half done and my goal is to finish that next *** Just took a 30 minute break to edit this chapter from Book 1 of Soldier
The crisscrossing bridges looked different now that I knew they were part of a spider’s network. As the chamber lit up from ...
2025-11-13 00:37:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe narrator starts recording World Sphere Book 2 this week! Probably 5 weeks away from release (mid-December). That means I am giving the Serphim subs a chance to score a free copy. There will be 50 US Codes, and 50 UK Codes. If you want one comment below with which code (US/Canada or UK) is for you. I distribute them in order of request...
2025-11-11 22:58:50 +0000 UTC View PostMaveith relented and let Evie open his chest. My thought was that his daughters would walk all over him. The chest was yellowed wood, circular, and I already knew what was inside from the last room’s reward. Evie removed the lid and looked extremely confused. “There is nothing in it?...
2025-11-11 22:52:12 +0000 UTC View PostIt is time to choose a POV chapter. Lots of choices but you only get one vote. For those of you new to the tier, your selections do affect the story. Example: Raelia was only supposed to survive book 1 and fade away, but you kept voting for her POV
2025-11-10 03:36:26 +0000 UTC View PostKyrenic was the first to join the table, his eyes travelling back and forth between us, trying to figure out what was going on. He poured himself a mug of warm beer. “I have some thoughts on how we can handle a few of the deep worms,” Kyrenic said while pointedly making eye contact with me.
I r...
2025-11-10 02:57:04 +0000 UTC View PostI checked my gear as we entered the dungeon. I had brought one short sword and one spear, and my pack contained just water and food. I also had two knives strapped to my waist. Castile was inspecting the walls; they were covered in script, but it wasn’t Latin. Konstantin moved next to me, 2025-11-09 01:55:32 +0000 UTC View Post
I edited these two chapters early and moved them over. I'm also going to post chapter 14 from book 1 in a moment. To reiterate, book 1 is being posted because it is getting edited. There are heavy edits in the first six chapters but no plot changes. From chapter 7 on, I am just trying to improve my early writing and ensure mechanics are consiste...
2025-11-09 01:53:47 +0000 UTC View PostThe streets were barely inhabited as people walked listlessly. The magistrate paraded us down the street like a prize. Most of the doors in the city appeared boarded, businesses and homes abandoned. At least the city seemed clean, even without a sewer system.
“Where is everyone?” Kyrenic asked as he fell...
2025-11-07 23:57:04 +0000 UTC View PostI pulled some maps from my space and the others dismounted and crowded around me while the legionnaires watched on. “If we travel north along the road, Varta is three hundred miles. The port city of Othal is close to Varta, and we can likely find passage there to the capital, but we might have to wait days or we...
2025-11-06 22:44:52 +0000 UTC View Post
As I work on today's chapter doing real world logistics, I have been updating the map. It is attached below. You download it, and then upload it on the website
http://azgaar.github.io/Fantasy-Map-Generator/
People have asked for me to add in pla...
Three legionnaires guarded the entrance of the cave. Inside, the men were all working to process the griffin. One man sorted feathers, another cleaned the talons and teeth, and another cut meat into thin strips to smoke them into jerky. As I looked around, a feather pillow hit me in the face, and I caught ...
2025-11-05 23:34:05 +0000 UTC View PostAs we climbed the next mountain, Renna paused to relieve herself out of sight of the others. Delmar asked me to stay close to her, so I stood guard while the embarrassed young woman did her business. When she finished, I took my turn, choosing a different rock to hide behind. I decided to experiment with my ...
2025-11-05 23:01:51 +0000 UTC View PostI realized I didn’t know where to go, as I wandered the second floor of the villa. A few servants noted my passing but they assumed I was allowed up here. Should I knock on random doors? Elora exited a room with a bundle of clothes and cocked her head at me. “What room is the mage in?” I asked the ...
2025-11-05 04:48:41 +0000 UTC View PostMateo was coming back from dinner with Felix. They were loud as they settled into their bunks, talking about a card game they had played during the meal and how Bentio, the smallest legionnaire in the company, had a lucky streak. “Where’s the mage?” I asked.
“Still eating. She’s down in the ...
2025-11-04 20:48:46 +0000 UTC View PostWhen we got to the bunk room, Mateo asked Renna with a formal bow, “Top or bottom, your mageness?”
The young woman did not appreciate his humor, ignored him, and took the lower bunk, forcing me to move my things. She opened her satchel and pulled out two large tomes. Although I had gained a lot of experience s...
2025-11-04 20:46:49 +0000 UTC View PostTonight I will be working on A Gladiator's Life chpater. I will probably go live on discord with the writing around 8pm and stay live for about an hour and half
someone suggested i add an appenidx at the back of the books. I started to pull together my notes and they are below as a draft. I think I might edit it to describe the attribute a...
2025-11-04 20:37:14 +0000 UTC View PostThe Deadline for Submissions is April 1st, 2026! I hope to be publishing A Soldier's Life Book 6 near the end of May (current preorders on Amazon say July 2026 but that is to be safe).
This fan fiction has a prize of hardcover copies of books 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and book 6 (when printed). All signed by me with w...
2025-11-04 15:16:41 +0000 UTC View PostThe warlord looked more like one of the orc elders from the Choosing. Glasha had told me that most warlords never lived past their fighting prime, instead preferring to confront challenges where they were likely to die. The wrinkled flesh of this orc made me curious if his tattoos...
2025-11-04 06:30:14 +0000 UTC View PostBelow is the link to the 323. Note to those who already read it. I have removed the purchase of the goliath translation amulet. I noted Eryk learned some of the language on the sailing over in teh last chapter, but the language amulet thing was a plot hole (i forgot about it) so I cut it out.
“We will take the high ground over there,” I motioned to my party. “We will wait for them to come to us.” If we didn’t show aggression, then they should talk with us.
The hill I chose was made of soft earth with dense brush around the base. My earth pulse didn’t detect any hidden th...
2025-11-03 03:57:37 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://www.patreon.com/collection/1802989?view=expanded
I am editig these chapters before posting. I did read/edit 322 this morning, but I need to focus on finishing Seraphim 478 that is close to done from yesterday and writing 479 tonight. E...
I was most surprised by the organization of the war camps below—uniform rows of blue, red, and black tents filled valley after valley of rolling green hills. The bugbears were even practicing in formations like a real army.
We passed over one of the conquered towns, and with my telescopic eye spell, I could see a nu...
2025-11-01 20:52:45 +0000 UTC View PostThe next night, we stay in an abandoned town, which was one of the northernmost settlements at the base of the Dragonspine Mountains. Unlike the other towns, there were four defensive towers and a low stone wall. It looked like the eastern wall had been attacked by a large, clawed creature, but it was repelled. Clear signs a...
2025-10-31 15:36:36 +0000 UTC View PostCaptain Liam waited for me while I met with Talia, Remy, and Selin. Callem should have been here, but was probably at Skyhold for the war council. Mia was absent because she was training new guards at our warehouses in Solaris City. Remy was bouncing in his seat, eager to get back to building the Ravenhawk. “You can go fir...
2025-10-30 03:10:24 +0000 UTC View Post“You are not going to help?” Alhar asked, his eyes focused on the struggling hill giant. We had been sure it was dead, as it wasn’t breathing when we viewed it through Evie’s spell form.
“I already killed six, and besides, it’s barely able to walk,” I said as the next essence started to ...
2025-10-28 20:48:12 +0000 UTC View PostReposting this chapter and deleting the old one. This has the changes plus 800 new words. Working on 476...250 words in
Hill giants were formidable foes. Each of the cursed titans was about 15 feet tall. The dumb brutes were insanely strong for their size, with an adult able to throw hundred-pound boulders hundreds of ...
2025-10-27 23:19:59 +0000 UTC View PostAs I rode back to the mining town, my clothes and armor dried. The bulette blood served as a great detergent, and my clothes smelled fresh and earthy—though I suspected that not all the fluids that had soaked me were blood. Ginger seemed to be expecting an apple, but the only thing I had that she migh...
2025-10-27 02:05:07 +0000 UTC View PostFelix woke me, and I tried to stand, but my the muscles in my legs would not cooperate. I collapsed to the floor and used my arms to pull myself up. Mateo chuckled at my discomfort. I slowly got my legs working and could feel every raw area of skin from yesterday’s ride.
Felix offered some advice. ...
2025-10-27 02:02:21 +0000 UTC View PostI looked at the door several times before deciding to just do it. The forty-foot-long storage room had two wide aisles and deep shelves filled with various items. Many of them were covered in layers of dust. I grabbed two large legionnaire backpacks and headed to the provision aisle first. My dimensional ...
2025-10-27 02:01:09 +0000 UTC View Post