Jibwrite

Ch 96 - Whirlwind

The training session the next morning was short. Venonat and Cloudburst were both fully healed, and it was time for more realistic battles. Only ‘more’ realistic because there were three days left until his League deadline, and they were fighting a monster.

David was worried at first about injuries. Three days was not enough time to re...

Ch 95 - Inevitable

The next morning they focused on Moves again. Poison Powder and Supersonic for Venonat, switching as he exhausted one type of energy or the other. When Cloudburst woke, they spent some time playing in the sand before she grew fed up. A dogfight against Venomoth proved to be an adequate apology to the grouchy bird, tho...

Arc 4 Faction Voting

I am looking for two factions for the start of the next arc. Keep in mind that Arc 4 is still several chapters away, and character introductions will depending on plot as well.

I believe everyone has one vote at the moment, so I'll take the top two choices if there are enough votes.

These are all the factions I think have appe...

Ch 94 - Strive

“Ow.”

Jenny held a hand in front of her mouth, clearly shocked or concerned–

She coughed once, then completely failed to hold back her giggles.

David looked at her, puzzled and unamused. How did she switch from psycho trainer to friendly without any gap in between? “Ugh.” Groaning, he lay down fully, resting his head ...

Ch 93 - Reflection

The meditation session did not go as planned.

Instead of being led through chants while some soothing music played in the background, David was instructed to sit, close his eyes and think. There was no clearing of his mind. No scented incense. No inner peace. Jenny told him to picture the training, walking him through the morning, promptin...

Ch 92 - Payback

David ran. He ran and shouted, and ran some more. Occasionally, Venonat and he would manage to pull off a maneuver and buy themselves some precious rest while Jenny and Venomoth adjusted. Venomoth wasn’t about to be hit by a Bug Bite, but a well-timed Nope could do a lot.

Twice Venonat and he managed to run into each other and suffer. Bo...

Ch 91 - The Dose makes the Poison

It was dark. Navigating by the moon dark. Fuchsia wasn’t awake yet, and only the occasional shadowed figure slipping through the streets gave any impression of the city being alive at all.

David wanted to be like Fuchsia. He’d been living odd hours since Venonat had joined the team, but this was a whole new who-needs-sleep level. The w...

Ch 90 - A Deal with the..

Once more, David was left alone with one of the most powerful people in Kanto.

It felt like there should be more gravitas to the situation. He was reeling - both from being face to face with the two gym leaders, and from what Sabrina had revealed before disappearing. The two of them had a presence. It wasn't subtle. A power beyond the phys...

Ch 89 - Long overdue

It was Koga, gym leader of Fuchsia.

The gym leader of Fuchsia, the head of the junta that controlled the city, the face of the sovereign, the power of the peninsula. He was an unassuming man, bereft of any adornments and sitting before a short wooden table on a simple cushion in an empty room.

David’s blood still ran cold. There wa...

Ch 88 - Principle

Getting to the Fuchsia gym was a challenge.

Unlike in Celadon or Saffron, the signposts for the gym were not laid out in an array, all pointing inwards towards the gym, but a line. Small pink hearts led the way, embossed on signs that were attached to random, convenient surfaces.

David was directed north, east, south, through narrow ...

Ch 87 - Support

“Are you sure you’re ready?”

David couldn’t hold back his grimace, or the flicker of uncertainty in his eyes. Louis looked away, turning his focus back to the climbing equipment he was meant to be inspecting.

Above them Cloudburst sweated, laboriously climbing into the sky as fast as possible. 

“No, but I’ve al...

Ch 86 - Battle scars

“Looking for a battle against zero badge, one Pokemon,” David shouted, diving into the crowd.

Several confused faces, some of which had been bobbing their way through the crowd towards him, scrunched up in confusion. The reaction wasn’t much of a surprise. For one, it was very early in the morning. People were tired. And then there w...

Ch 85 - The Safari Zone

The path to the Safari Zone was nothing like the rest of Fuchsia. For one it was cobbled, rough bumpy stone instead of smooth tarmac. That was the least of the changes.

Tightly packed houses and apartments gave way to spacious villas and eventually mansions. Most of these large structures were constructed of the local white wood, but some ...

Ch 84 - Recoil

“Bug Bite.”

It started with a flicker. Small sparks followed. They illuminated even smaller circles before disappearing. Each gave a tiny glimpse of color, the packed dirt displayed through lime lenses, but too briefly. You couldn’t focus on a detail, on one stone or pebble, before the glimpse was gone.

The sparks multiplied an...

Ch 82 - Persona Two

“You sure this is okay?”

Louis shrugged. “I have to test them either today or tomorrow. Teaching you and getting your help is just lucky timing.”

“And the trees?” David asked, chewing on his lip.

“Officially, these need to be tested against a rock face or in a cavern.” Louis waved his hand at the flat marshland ...

Ch 82 - Change of clothes

Fuchsia was not a fun place to be early in the morning.

Locals swarmed through the thin streets, rushing forward towards head-on collisions only to sidestep their neighbour at the last moment in perfect sync. Groups of strangers, all moving at different tempos, worked in harmony to avoid each other and get to their destination as fast as p...

Ch 80 - Nope

Cloudburst swooped, swinging back and forth through the air like a pendulum as she closed the gap. Mid turn, she banked suddenly, throwing her wings out wide in preparation for a-

“Nope!”

She swung her wings forward, too far into the process of the Move to abort now. Her powerful limbs created small bursts of wind, but no light.<...

Ch ?? - Gary the First

Gary was ready.

He’d prepared everything he could possibly need. Two changes of clothes, four sets of underwear, a towel and one extra pair of boots. Spare clothes were important, everyone said that. Then there was the survival equipment. A knife he’d secreted away weeks before. A compass and a map for navigation. That small pop up ten...

Ch 79 - Dissent

I’ve realised I nearly doubled up on names - (Elise in the market and Eloise, Dojo member and Fred’s mother) From here on, Elise in the Fuchsia market will be Marie. I’ve updated Ch 78.

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"Up!” David shouted, “Up Cloudburst!”

The smoke continued to spread, climbing hi...

Ch 78 - Weaving a Story

David had fucked up.

He had really fucked up and he didn’t even know how badly.

‘Venonat - Moths and Legends’ didn’t have any of the information on Moves, diet plans or training tips that he’d been looking for. It was just a history book, mostly about the Marsh rebellion and useless to a trainer. Instead it contained a dead...

Ch 77 - Counter

Pidgey - Cloudburst stood on the packed dirt, facing off against... the Bug type. The purple bee without wings. His new Pokemon.

“I really need to find out its name,” David murmured as he watched them. Today.. Today had been a bit manic with the early morning wake up, meeting Louis, the ranger, and arriving in Fuchsia city in general, ...

Ch 76 - First night in Fuchsia

David stood still in the centre of the now deserted street.

A man with dark indigo hair staggered towards him. A Voyant. A Psychic.

The locals of Fuchsia gathered in the alleys, and at the edges of the road, watching them.

David should have been doing something. Running, protesting, even just stepping out of the distressed psyc...

Ch 75 - Colour

With a single step David crossed from marshland to city.

Ten steps later he passed the first alleyway, and as its traffic merged onto the main road behind him, all sight of the Route was blocked. It was as if the city had swallowed him up in a single bite.

Up close, the white walls of the houses around him were marred by narrow grey ...

Ch 74 - Keeper

Cloudburst dived under the branches, her wings silent. She spiralled under the twisted white branches, avoiding the hanging vines as they swayed in her passage. As she passed the densest vegetation she straightened and her wings began to beat.

Whoop. Whoop. The sounds were faint, but with only the bubbling of the marsh to accompany them th...

Ch 73 - Preference

“Crap.” David sighed, passing the offending material between his fingers once more.

In response to his outburst, Cloudburst let out a slow squawk. She continued to peck at her feathers up in that squat white tree. He wouldn’t be getting any help from her anytime soon.

When he released her this morning, she’d appeared on the g...

Ch 72 - Interloper

Once the convoy started moving again David was forced to admit that Gleem’s old pillow cushion was needed. Aaron’s wagon had nothing even remotely resembling suspension. Every hole and bump in the road they passed over felt like a mini earthquake. The sliver of comfort didn’t make the stains on the Tauros' cushion any less disgusting, but ...

Ch 71 - Branding

David looked at the Tauros.

The Tauros looked at David.

Cloudburst stared at the Tauros.

The Tauros tossed its head and eyed her back.

The Pokemon’s eyes were oval-shaped and vertical, giving it a predator-like stare even though to David, it was, well, a cow. Long body, four legs and broad shoulders. Definitely a cow. I...

Ch 70 - Elephant

“Ah ah aah,” David hissed, slowly pulling his right shoe off.

Pidgey let out a light shrill, hopping closer. She twitched worriedly, and ducked her head close to get a look at his foot.

Too close. Her eyes widened and her feathers bunched as she caught the whiff that was released by the now free foot and socks.

“Pii!” C...

Ch 69 - Improvise

David packed up slowly the next morning.

He couldn’t quite decide if he preferred the smooth ground by the cliff edge as a campsite over the long grass in a wooded clearing. His feet and clothes weren’t soaked by morning dew, but the stone ground was cooold. It hadn’t been bad last night, but when he woke up this morning the chill ha...

Ch 68 - Adapt

It was a windy day. Branches swayed. Leaves swished.

Down below in the forest, David felt very little of that. The occasional gust penetrated the weaved trunks to reach him, but at that point even a mighty gale was weakened to a wheezy gasp. He was glad to be back in the trees after so long in the city and then the plains around it. It was...