Temptation Chapter 3 - Pages 1-6 (sfw) - Videl learns flight!
Added 2023-07-31 02:47:07 +0000 UTCSpoilers! Just kidding :P this is the sfw side to the update. The nsfw will be uploaded early access in a bit.
I’ll have the Lois Lane nsfw up soon! Thanks so much again for your patience! I’ll also be updating my comm post since it sounds like some peoppe couldn’t access the form? I’ll probably just have everyone email inquiries ;o; I’m so sorry again!
My health is improving so I should be back on track soon o7 thank you for supporting me through this really tough time ;; I can’t explain how much I appreciate it!
Comments
Cute :3
2023-08-16 20:20:22 +0000 UTCShe’s too impatient LOL but luckily Gohan had a bit more time to teach her actual ki control ;)
2023-08-01 07:14:59 +0000 UTCIf we are even close to the canon timeline, it is way too soon for the bugman, iirc this story started in the calendar year before History of Trunks does, then it took maybe 3 years after Gohan died to finish the Time Machine, then depending on how one thinks db time travel works in db Trunks may have had to wait the three years between mecha frieza and the android saga, so that’s maybe 6 years b4 Cell
Xillan Commander
2023-07-31 12:03:22 +0000 UTCAlready airborne, don’t know why I didn’t expect that. Good work as usual. Note: The dialogue on the top half of the last page in this set is a bit awkwardly worded, imho, “SINCE MONTHS AGO. WE HAVEN'T HAD ANY SIGHTINGS OF THOSE NASTY ROBOTS.” And this might be a regional thing but that is a really weird way to phrase that, it feels like a sentence is missing before it, where I live and from what I’ve read a clearer phrasing would be something like: “WE HAVEN'T HAD ANY SIGHTINGS OF THOSE NASTY ROBOTS. FOR MONTHS NOW”. or “SINCE OUR FIGHT MONTHS AGO. WE HAVEN'T HAD ANY SIGHTINGS OF THOSE NASTY ROBOTS.” Or “IT HAS BEEN MONTHS, AND WE HAVEN'T HAD ANY SIGHTINGS OF THOSE NASTY ROBOTS.” But that’s just my opinion
Xillan Commander
2023-07-31 11:44:17 +0000 UTCThe androids haven't appeared in months? They don't seem to be the type to train, so they're either in hiding/gave up on the whole being evil thing, biding their time, or a certain other android got to them first...
Rebellion598
2023-07-31 07:27:17 +0000 UTC
