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Chapter 143 In space with a junkyard ship

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No slave arc is definitely a relief! And I don't entirely mind a romantic thing in principle but Remi has some really shitty taste in women... Like seriously dude, the 'dont stick your dick in crazy' is a warning not a challenge of your piping skills!

Skye Morningstar

Yeah I wouldn't mind that for sure

Skye Morningstar

I dunno. I like this one much more.

J S

Got it. Maybe he’ll find an entertainment baron or organization soon in his wanderings.

J S

I'd read that

ReadingObsessed

I also feel as if something is missing. I imagine a chapter from Remi, before this one, recapping the fight through his own internal monologue. It would help clarify his stance and how threatened? Entertained? His desire for freedom? Into perspective.

Merlin's Fan

Looking forward to the side book

Lazyperson321

Thanks. I am not that interested in the possible Verona arc at the moment - maybe after Remi had had more book(s) to grow and become a galaxy wide force.

Dragon Patreon

That's because it was Verrona pov. She missed it.

Apinsig

That disclaimer in the end is nice, but the actual chapter reads like start of a slave arc. And like that arc will take up a large part of the next book, because why would this book end here otherwise? Even if it's short and he escapes, which is not guaranteed, many readers wouldn't buy next book with such an ending. I know I wouldn't. I also completely missed the nano machines part in previous chapters, but it's probably issue with me.

CherMi

I would like something with the POV of the Barge leadership. It makes sense why Verrona wants to keep him prisoner. But why would the Barge leadership go along with it?

Caleb Reusser


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