The Recruiting - by abimboleb
Added 2018-05-29 22:05:24 +0000 UTCThis weeks tale was originally was planned for an Easter story. But as I worked on it time got really around me and I wasn't really satisfied with the result. So I changed the ending and now⦠here it is!
Comments
Update this week?
Reclaimer
2018-06-06 01:21:09 +0000 UTCUh... sex. Bimbos are supposed to like having sex, that why men fantasize about them. You ended saying that guys were coming, so let's see the men put their hands on them. You have done sex scenes before, but you could do a few more subtle things like having a guy slip his hand into a girl's shirt or up her skirt. Something to warm up the action, before getting to the main stuff.
Merv PH
2018-05-31 22:22:14 +0000 UTCsuch as?
abimboleb
2018-05-31 07:56:53 +0000 UTCi agree
scopes777
2018-05-30 23:59:02 +0000 UTCThis was great. But, I would like to see more "action" in these stories.
Merv PH
2018-05-30 22:18:03 +0000 UTCReally liked this one!
TF
2018-05-30 19:14:28 +0000 UTC
