Story 1 _ Vengeance (Completed)
Added 2022-06-08 12:11:57 +0000 UTCThis is the first story I ever done called "Vengance" This story is about a criminal who is sentenced to jail by comitting a rape to a teen girl (Which was stopped by the policewoman). After get out of jail, he never forget that day. He decides to take revenge on that policewoman. He's finally found her info. and study her schedule thoroughly. That one day he disguised as a shipper and infiltrate her apartment. The rest of the story is what you can see here! Hope you'll enjoy this! Uncen link https://www.mediafire.com/file/0p5mkbsct3whzke/Vengeance_Uncen.rar/file
Comments
Amazing painting! Your skills have improved a lot！
TheOraclePipiDoge
2022-12-16 13:09:22 +0000 UTCWhen will this work be finished? Where can I see the uncensored version?
螺丝钉
2022-09-03 20:49:24 +0000 UTCYep sure. Flat color ofcourse :D
PaTuTena
2022-06-23 23:56:45 +0000 UTCGreat！are you going to add colour？
coco
2022-06-23 15:37:36 +0000 UTCOkay will try when I finish the lineworks :D
PaTuTena
2022-06-15 11:41:52 +0000 UTCThink it was something along the lines of having the link to mega.nz on their other site (deviantart, for some) and password here (visible only for subscribers).
DeepeyeLV
2022-06-14 11:24:33 +0000 UTCThanks, but Fanbox state that i cant even post link to the uncencored version. Is that ok to do so?
PaTuTena
2022-06-13 15:18:19 +0000 UTCRegarding uncensored, seen some other guys using mega.nz with a password for subscribers.
DeepeyeLV
2022-06-13 15:04:01 +0000 UTCVerywell I'll put texts into final version. Please correct the dictation if any LoL
PaTuTena
2022-06-10 09:25:47 +0000 UTCNoted, There'll be full version with named pics :]
PaTuTena
2022-06-10 07:43:23 +0000 UTCLoc, one suggestion - picture naming. Maybe you plan to address it later, it would be nice to have them lined up by name so when you save pictures, they don't mix up in order. Especially useful for longer stories! <3
DeepeyeLV
2022-06-09 20:52:27 +0000 UTCLoc, your English is perfectly fine... I really got into your art as soon as I saw it. Super well done. Glad to see you made a profile here, so we can support! REALLY looking forward for more <3
DeepeyeLV
2022-06-09 20:46:58 +0000 UTCI think you,d be better put your fanbox link on pixiv. It was hard for me to find out that you have opened fanbox. :D
jimrayner112
2022-06-09 04:45:08 +0000 UTCNot right now mate. I have alot story in mind to draw out :D
PaTuTena
2022-06-08 23:36:00 +0000 UTCMasterpiece, I rly look forward for your future work, also just wondering do you accept commission?
ユヨウ
2022-06-08 21:58:01 +0000 UTCI'm not good at english :]]] will do some shading in greyscale. If fanbox goes well, I'll consider for color shading because it'll be much time consuming then black & white
PaTuTena
2022-06-08 13:24:31 +0000 UTCGreat. Are u going to add some texts and colors?
jimrayner112
2022-06-08 13:11:00 +0000 UTC
