Extra scene for Vengeance Story P1
Added 2024-05-07 10:22:34 +0000 UTCYeap! I'm making Vengeance into detail comic lads! I use chat GPT for texts hope this doesn't sound silly to some native speaker lol! Anyway, does anyone know where could I find sfx sound text online? BTW, please feel free to correct the grammar If needed, thank you! Do you guys need uncen version for these sketches? Please let me know
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Haha sounds good! But nah, like the other guy said, the meaning is clear, nothing *needs* to be changed, just putting myself out there as a potential source if you want any help with grammar and such.
Batcat
2024-05-28 14:09:20 +0000 UTCI’ll put stocking mask in the most recent short story kkkk
PaTuTena
2024-05-19 12:03:24 +0000 UTCYes sure mate, then I’ll remake from the start kkkkk 😂
PaTuTena
2024-05-19 12:02:24 +0000 UTCI personally don't believe there's anything "natural" in those particular circumstances LOL so never mind about any correct or articulate form of "dialogue"... those hot pics talk for themselves anyway...
NYSTmd
2024-05-19 11:14:49 +0000 UTCGreat story as usual mate! Personally wish he had a nylon stocking mask over his face LOL and yes, please send the uncen version of these sketches as it was in the past... many thanks
NYSTmd
2024-05-18 16:09:44 +0000 UTCLove these sketched stories, they are fantastic and show just enough. Very happy to hear you’re making a full comic as well! On that note, if you want help with Grammar I’d be happy to help. It’s mostly good here, and definitely understandable, but some areas could be improved in things like word choice and turns of phrase. For example: “I think you’re not in a position to refuse, young lady” works, but “I don’t think you’re in any position to refuse, young lady” flows better and sounds more natural. I have more notes if you want them and, like I said, I’d be happy to help with future projects.
Batcat
2024-05-18 12:52:17 +0000 UTCHmmm then, I will split those in parts :D
PaTuTena
2024-05-12 14:20:08 +0000 UTCI did not receive any kind of notification about the update. BTW, I think uncen versions of these would be nice!
Mr. Metzger
2024-05-09 12:45:17 +0000 UTCYes, more hot pages to come. But does Fanbox notice you when I update current post? or it only inform when I make new post?
PaTuTena
2024-05-08 06:55:57 +0000 UTCThis looks so damn hot, especially that very last panel! The progression is very neat, too. Looking forward to seeing more from this series!
Mr. Metzger
2024-05-07 17:17:45 +0000 UTC
