Public Script + Main Character Expressions
Added 2020-07-31 13:17:14 +0000 UTCHi Everyone,
I wanna share the public script (Day 1 + Day 2) for V 0.2 of this game and all of main character expressions.
This will make you easier to :
1. Tell us if you find any grammar/spelling mistake in the game
2. Suggest your dialogues/Jokes into the game for future release.
I hope you enjoy em..
Cheers,
Celeng
Comments
Day 2: row 18: "...Inquisitor..." (title) row 20/27: "Planetary Governor" looks more normal row 27: "...head to..." row 33: "...Governor." (Consistency) row 40: "...may I be..." row 42: "...has been..." row 44: "...jurisdiction..." but actually nothing is beyond the Inquisition's jurisdiction - perhaps "This issue is outside of our remit."? row 48: "...disappearance." row 50: "We have received reports of several..." row 51: "...disappearance..." row 58: "...Governor who..." row 59: "...indeed it was." (or "...indeed he did.") row 60: "...do I need..." row 61: "...investigation here within..." row 63: "...if I were..." row 66: "...important matters that I need to address." (or "that I must attend to." works, too) row 67: "Report back to me..."
Russ Williams
2020-07-31 15:13:04 +0000 UTCI'm not much of a proofreader, but... Day 1: row 87: "...naughty content..." row 92: "...grateful..." row 127: "...Sister..." row 151: "...acolytes will..." row 218: "Cordelia pushes two of her fingers deep inside Heidi's pussy." or even "Cordelia puts two fingers deep inside of Heidi." row 222: wouldn't she be able to feel that herself - maybe a statement not a question? row 229: "...pulls out..." row 362: "...caressing..." row 369: "You pull out your fingers and caress your clit some more" (or "begin caressing your clit again" or "continue caressing your clit") row 400: "...I'm..." row 401: "...I'm..."
Russ Williams
2020-07-31 14:55:03 +0000 UTCActually yeah. The inspiration of that expression is ahegao.. but βcumβ is shorter for coding. So we named it βcumβ instead π£
Adeptus Celeng
2020-07-31 14:49:46 +0000 UTC
