What happens next?
Added 2019-12-07 14:01:00 +0000 UTCYeah, this question is that blunt.
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It seems logical.
Roseleaf
2019-12-09 21:05:06 +0000 UTCThe con floor is where we'll find Steve and Tiffany - as they are in the main character shot at the top of this page, they have to be important, yes?
Martin Lock
2019-12-09 20:42:56 +0000 UTCNothing too humorous in the hotel room. But there is some business there. Sometimes I know people want sexy stuff, and would be showers. But she was also standing around naked for like 2 pages.
Roseleaf
2019-12-09 15:53:14 +0000 UTCthe humor opportunities on the con floor are more varied and potentially plot-surprise to the reader. Getting ready, what can she do? snap herself with the bra strap?
terry gene
2019-12-08 20:26:13 +0000 UTC