Issue 5 - Pg 8
Added 2020-11-09 05:23:04 +0000 UTCThe end out this months comic update. Gwen is in a good but scary place. But we will pick up once again in December.
We have sketches and polls for our bonus and decider tiers coming soon. .
Comments
She's kinda guessing based on what she was told.
Roseleaf
2020-12-01 15:17:16 +0000 UTC"I've been trying to fix it, but I'm stuck with this rack and the long hair, but I got my book back." "The comic and the name is mine again, but it seems like I could have done better." Huh? Is the magic gone now? How would Gwen know that? I really hope there's still enough magic to fix her body. Probably can't do anything about her height, but hopefully enough so that at least she could say her hair is a wig and that she's wearing padding.
Alex Smyth
2020-12-01 13:52:50 +0000 UTCSo has Gwen now erased Ken completely from reality then?
Ravyn
2020-11-10 17:36:53 +0000 UTCIn panel one, "I kept changing my life" surely? Moving into murkier waters, I don't know if one ought to keep to the same tense in a word balloon; grammatically correct, but not everyone naturally speaks that way. So does "kept" mean that it should be "said" rather than "say"...?
Martin Lock
2020-11-10 13:47:25 +0000 UTCOh well, nobody's perfect, Gwen.
Halima Abdi
2020-11-09 15:26:56 +0000 UTC
