Open Trade - Pg 28
Added 2021-08-07 14:00:14 +0000 UTCEDIT : As promised, a fixed shower curtain. Thank you all for addressing it. I appreciate your feedback.
Who assembled this shower curtain!?
More importantly, Wyatt gets some private time.
I'll see Deciders in a couple days for an Event Poll.
Aug 16th will be a Con Artist Update.
Comments
Our decides have been great with also wanting her to be different from Gwen. Should be a fun journey.
Roseleaf
2021-08-12 14:25:15 +0000 UTCI think Wyatts hair looks great here. It will be great to see the wonders of the comb. When you get to hair, I hope curly/very curly is an option so as to contrast from how gwen had long hair in Con-Artist. I love how you went tall this time instead of short to contrast. As I mentioned in another comment, not a lot of tall m2f tgs out there. So honestly you shouldn't mess with it as the height really makes this story stand out from the almost universal transformation to a short girl found in almost all TG stories and comics. Women can be tall too!
TrueRonin88
2021-08-12 12:09:00 +0000 UTCAt 5'8" it tends to not be much of a problem for me. But it has still oddly happens once in a while when I'm traveling.
Roseleaf
2021-08-09 15:24:04 +0000 UTCI'm only 5'11" and low shower heads like that are such a pain, and way too frequent
Ravyn
2021-08-09 15:18:16 +0000 UTCI agree, right now it just looks like a grey censor box.
Halima Abdi
2021-08-07 15:45:51 +0000 UTCNot to be overly critical, but I think some rings along the top and maybe some exterior lines to show bends and creases in the fabric would really help that shower curtain look better.
Mr. Domino
2021-08-07 15:20:00 +0000 UTCWas hard to decide where the camera lands. She was out in the open naked in the previous shot.
Roseleaf
2021-08-07 14:43:00 +0000 UTCThe shower curtain being just high enough for decency kills me XD
Min-ji
2021-08-07 14:02:50 +0000 UTC
