Open Trade - Pg 236
Added 2024-08-05 15:52:54 +0000 UTCWhat what does Stephanie think about Mina's choice? Is she ok with Mina taking such a huge risk behind her back?
None of this is really visible here, but this took a little longer to get out as I realized that the layout of Stephanie's room didn't make any sense. The wall the window is on, is techincally not an outside wall. So the next time you see Stephanie's room, it may look a little bit different.
I know that seems not remotely important compared to what else is going on here.
How do you feel on the evloution of their 'friendship'?
Comments
thanks! and welcome aboard!
Roseleaf
2024-08-07 13:53:15 +0000 UTCWell, that's a fun development.
taifea
2024-08-07 11:53:45 +0000 UTCThey can have a nice little moment.
Roseleaf
2024-08-06 23:45:13 +0000 UTCAaah cuuute.
Speedball
2024-08-06 23:21:16 +0000 UTCThe whole situation seems really sudden and coming out of nowhere. I was expecting a gradual escalation during Steph’s trip, at the most.
Halima Abdi
2024-08-05 16:59:04 +0000 UTCThe entire situation is weird and I don't care for the 'romantic' line, as it comes off as creepy. Honestly I forgot Mina even existed. The only real plus for me here is the fact that we're now away from the tired 'guy transforms into a woman and ends up in a sexy lesbian relationship' trope.
Mr. Domino
2024-08-05 16:53:00 +0000 UTCI don't know if it's a pick up line if they are already shirtless in your bedroom. :)
Roseleaf
2024-08-05 16:08:43 +0000 UTCWeirdly, “shut up and f*ck me” has never worked as a pickup line for me
Adam Reisinger
2024-08-05 16:07:54 +0000 UTCThere are a lot of backgrounds where it doesn't matter where it is just a color with nothing special. I've been going in to put more work into settings we are going to be in more often. Prepping them for use. I realized the layout was entirely wrong.
Roseleaf
2024-08-05 15:57:36 +0000 UTCI honestly haven't paid attention to the setting layouts. The characters and story sufficiently grab my attention.
Czarzhan
2024-08-05 15:55:24 +0000 UTC
