Hivemind(ed) Page 30
Added 2025-08-12 22:10:15 +0000 UTCMade it to 30 pages!
Don't do flowers, kids.
Fun Fact: I had planned this out to be an absolute trip with an assortment of goofiness, but it would've extended the page count unnecessarily. We're going for succinctness as a primary goal in this work!
Also, is it cluttered? How's the pacing for you guys/ gals/ all other configurations? Let me know!
More tomorrow!
Comments
Loving the pacing and the writing! I appreciate your attention to trimming off excess, but sometimes extra stuff is warranted. This is one of my favorite stories for sure - I’m curious to how far thing’s will go and am all here for it!
Mach
2025-08-13 01:55:06 +0000 UTCYou've got to be udderly kidding me! ...Mooving on... Hm, may have to rethink my approach then. I'm trying not to add too much 'fluff' to this comic, but maybe I need to get out of my head a little bit more? Thanks for the feedback!
MassManic
2025-08-13 00:04:03 +0000 UTCI love goofiness...the more the better (with a hint of seriousness of course). I'm currently roleplaying with GPT-5 a cow-gal transformation fest with more ''moo'' puns you could ever imagine.
chocolate_prophet
2025-08-12 23:44:54 +0000 UTC
