Page 34. UH-OH! Where is that glob of honey going?
Hm, not too sure about these last two pages. On reflection I could have made them a little better in certain ways, but it would have meant extending the length of this part when what we have is serviceable to drive the plot.
What do you all think?
More tomorrow!
Bonin
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