FBtW Chapter 16 Alpha
Added 2023-02-28 23:47:50 +0000 UTCHey there~!
So… here we are… the Alpha for Chapter 16.
I'm really proud of this one, as it's been in the works for quite a while, and despite all the hurdles in the last few months, I managed to get it as polished as any Alpha ever was.
In truth, this is what Alphas were meant to be from the start, but eh… life got in the way.
Anyway, expect this standard from future reveals.
I believe that keeping to this level of finish will allow a smoother and more expeditious transition to a Beta, and thus will translate into quicker Public releases in turn.
In order to access this chapter directly, use the Chapter Select Tool and Newest Update.
Let me know what you think!
Regards,
~Kael
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Comments
reread C14 and binged read the two chapters. I'd say, the development of the plot becomes more dire and makes me hook more. I like the new gal's attitude, pessimistic but not despairing, she really knows reality, new fav character and the dynamic interaction and Erof's. She's not oversaturated as the femdom or edgy I usually see in medias. I know there's a word for her character I just don't seem to recall what it was. And I see some resemblance of Arya, in GoT. In my opinion. Love the update, can't wait to see the entire chapters gets polished in the upcoming months
Theverel Vcron
2023-03-05 06:27:09 +0000 UTCThis chapter is very well made for a alpha version. It felt longer than the previous chapters. I look forward for the next chapter! :)
Nicklas Spanel
2023-03-02 14:51:52 +0000 UTCYour novel is sooooo good <3 i cant get enough of it :3
Neku the Fox
2023-03-02 02:52:19 +0000 UTC
