Warden Chapter 1 Revised Pages 48
Added 2023-01-13 22:56:23 +0000 UTCRevisions~ This is the last full page. Next week will hopefully only have 4 pages with minor revisions each. Which means chapter 1 will have 80+ pages!
I made this page to showcase the Prisoner to highlight his importance that was not covered in the original. The murals and the stone reliefs carved into the tomb serve as a marker and a warning.
We see images of his war hounds holding spears warding against a burning skull. One guards a pregnant hound, while another is grabbing on to the hands of another woman. And finally the bee above the murals and the one inside the pendant are shown in the same page, underlining the link between them.
Comments
Thanks. I had hoped so when I started these but one always has doubts. What I am looking forward to are parts later on in the story - expanded sex scenes and especially the fight against Crusher and Whisper. - but I'll try to get to those after book 1 is completed
Groz
2023-01-14 05:20:32 +0000 UTCvery true. but only after she swells to the point where she can be rolled around like a ball.
Groz
2023-01-14 05:03:47 +0000 UTCGlad to see all these revisions… fills in a lot of welcome details that were previously missing. Makes for a much better story.
SomeYoungGuy
2023-01-14 04:57:14 +0000 UTCThe comic will abruptly end one day when it turns out that Warden has a lethal allergy to bees.
Zealot17
2023-01-13 23:22:24 +0000 UTC
