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Added 2023-07-21 22:30:24 +0000 UTCInsight, doesn't want to contain the Prisoner. She needs to transport him. He needs to be pacified...
A bit of inferred spoilers ahead*
I'm starting to write the sex scenes from this group. Thinking of certain types of magic 'imbued' beads. Ideas are welcomed.
Also I have another question. What's the general mood on fleshing out the sex scenes. Should I go back to the elf orgy scene after this chapter or should I finish out book before doing so? (one more chapter to go.)
Comments
Looks like the comments are for sexy times with the elves are going to be in before book 1 is completed. And that is also in line with what the discord channel has been stating.
Groz
2023-07-23 20:34:32 +0000 UTCImbued beads ideas, sexy focused. Transformation - turning an elf into a lowly human (even temporarily) for humiliation purposes. Bondage! Hot/cold for temperature play.
Dragon Cobolt
2023-07-22 01:40:34 +0000 UTCSwap abilities and powers with the knowledge of how to use them*. It would make just a few hounds very difficult to beat. Of course the swap must be willing by both parties. You can't just yoink someone's abilities. e.g. Grace get's pinned down and held by a bunch of enemies trying to capture her. Crusher is separated and can't get to Grace. Grace swaps abilities with Crusher. Now Grace is breaking bones and Crusher is zotting enemies with fire missiles. * after effects may include constipation, dizziness, drowsiness, dry mouth, headache, insomnia, nausea, dementia, and lingering schizophrenia. Consult with your demigod before use. Tell your demigod if your condition lasts or gets worse.
jbezorg
2023-07-21 23:53:53 +0000 UTCWill never say no to an elf orgy.
Ghilz
2023-07-21 23:31:13 +0000 UTCFirst id sat flest out the scenes, and finish the book Second about the beads: Jose idea about sharing is great, but what it Warden could empower his hounds also while they were in possession of a bead and his has one as well? And them comes another thought; what if he could imbue traits or power Into these orbs and somehow imbed or insert them Into his hounds
Lasse Henriksen
2023-07-21 22:49:59 +0000 UTCI remember an old superpower in Dishonored 2 that lets you connect the fates of different people. Meaning what happens to one, the others connected also happens to them with either death or unconsciousness. Only in this case perhaps the beads let him connect the group together and let them share senses. Depends on the length in my opinion but you have already shown you can go back and make scenes longer so I say finish the book.
Jose
2023-07-21 22:41:27 +0000 UTC
