In the previous version I felt that there was a lack of intimate moments. Where you actively saw the gas mask wearing army interacting with their captives as plunder. The narcotic haze would keep the feeble, ready, and hungry. Some would be chained to the ground or the walls, begging to be used. Others are set free, too frenzied to do anything but chase after the next body. It would be both genders with captured men also being unwilling participants. The half elves valuing beauty, intelligence, magical potency, the empowered, youth, and the skilled for their breeding stocks.
The other change I wanted to include, was the hint the Divinity is allowing this conversation to reach the Prisoner's ears. She is choosing her words with care, knowing that the Prisoner would move to capture pawns. In these pages, she is strongly suggesting that she knows his importance, that she is filled with greed, and that she will be setting up the limited teleportation world tree. All valuable information which the Prisoner would have to comb through.
Of course this knowledge is only a distraction in the case of Insight's loss. And if Insight had won or Insight's breaking took time, this precaution would not be needed. It was all a calculation to buy time to bring the entire army.
Tier lists
Sparrow Rewards
Owl Rewards
Raven Rewards
Divinity Rewards