Warden Page 157R
Added 2024-06-21 20:16:26 +0000 UTCA little bit of celebration here as I hit my deadlines~ It's a happy day....
So part of the changes here are two fold. In the original comic on page 160, the Divinity told the Owls to have the Queen put up the same show in front of their former subjects. Later on, I came to realize it would be better if I showed the action instead of telling the audience about it. These people trapped with their heads exposed are the nobility being forced to watch as their Queen debases herself and her children. This is a ceremony meant to break the spirit of the kingdom. To show that even the rulers of humanity are nothing more than animals.
Of course this changes the dialog. Insight's conversation with the Divinity was relatively private. It had to be changed for the audience in the royal hall and maybe even a future voyeuristic Prisoner. More to come next week.
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Comments
You are absolutely right.
Groz
2024-06-23 16:55:29 +0000 UTCI feel it should be "we ARE on the verge of total victory". Instead of "we on the verge of total victory"
Sparky1x
2024-06-23 13:11:15 +0000 UTCLove this scene. The speech bubble between panel one and two feels like it's missing a word.
Sparky1x
2024-06-23 13:10:03 +0000 UTCthank you! It's been great going back and updating the artwork. I'm thrilled to hear that you love these.
Groz
2024-06-22 10:57:21 +0000 UTCI truly love these revisions you have chosen to give us. Thank you and Kudos! Interestingly, for me, it’s not just the lightly revised storytelling, but an opportunity to go back and review your past drawings. The newer works are far more refined, showing your progress thru time. Yet the originals are quick to remind me of just how skilled you were to begin with. Nice!
Expect_no_Mercy
2024-06-22 03:21:37 +0000 UTC
