Miss Cheshire's check-up 👨‍⚕️

Thanks! The whole Carol thing was one of those last-minute additions that suddenly came to me, and seemed quite neat. Is it called "Chekov's gun", where you mention something seemingly unimportant then reveal its importance later, or is that something else? Literary terms always confuse me!

Halrion

Really love this one! The illustration is perfect and the story is excellent. So much good stuff going on...and a very nice ending for Miss Cheshire with Carol on being the nurse. Awesome work!

Samster

Thanks so much Joe! Really enjoyed writing this one. I'll definitely do a profile for her in future.

Halrion

Oh my god I absolutely love this! A pampered prissy beautiful blonde turned fat gutted pig because of her rampant indulgence HAHA. Id love to see where she stacks up on the greediness scale, she seems like an Amelia gone wild, or a Kari even. Id love to see how she stacks up. Spoiled greedy arrogant hog that she is! Amazing story

Joe

Thank you! Really glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes, as much as I enjoy writing, I start to lose interest when I find that a certain scene or piece of dialogue isn't working (it's probably why I flit between so many projects). But with this one I enjoyed the process throughout.

Halrion

Thanks! Facial expressions are something I struggle with most, and are one of the biggest limitations I find in Daz, especially when you make a character's face softer and rounder. They are getting better, though, and textures are always improving. I'm looking at ways to improve them in Photoshop too. I've also (thanks to the money received here!) just invested in some new hardware which should speed up the whole process up a lot. On my current set up I have to tweak an expression, render it to a certain percentage. Stop, tweak, re-render, etc. Change lighting, re-render, tweak lighting, re-render, and so on. Each render would take ten/fifteen minutes to become clear enough for me to see if the changes were working. And the final render would usually have to be left on overnight (sometimes two nights, and even then I was limited to scenes with only one or two characters. But with the new hardware I've invested in this should become much faster - and should enable me to create higher quality stuff more quickly, with more characters involved too. I'll probably do a separate post about this when it arrives! Very excited! 😁

Halrion

Thank you! They are always a great starting point in this genre! 😄

Halrion

Thank you! I have a follow-up story or two in mind for Sarah.

Halrion

This is comedy gold 🤣. I love how her train of thought/speech gets interrupted as she realizes what the doctor has said mid-sentence. I see why you enjoyed writing this. I enjoyed reading it.

Great short story, that facial expression is priceless 😂

KewlKidz

Nice quick story. I really like "medical check-up scenes"

Hecschuy

Amazing story and pic!!! Hope you have a sequel!! Thanks for this work!!