Author's Note: Opinions
Added 2025-11-10 22:11:34 +0000 UTCHey Guys.
Currently we are 18 chapters in. How are you liking the new fic so far?
First of all, this is mainly to apologise about over exaggerating Toru's reactions to the MC in the last chapter. I have corrected it to the best of my ability in Chapter 17.
She is Not scared of him like he is a dangerous person but is simply avoiding bad luck due to a bit of superstition after their initial encounters.
I do hope I didn't write her way out of character, now did I make her appear cowardly.
Second, seriously, your thoughts and opinions on how the book is progressing so far is needed so I can know the direction I am taking is right.
The tone of the story is comedic thriller so I hope I am doing a good job in the comedy part.
Also, I have skipped romance in all of my previous fics for various reasons. I want to see if I can develop this one. Female Lead choices?
Comments
I'm loving it, oh my god the eri chapter tore my heart out, every fic chooses to save her, I've never read one where this happens, the poor baby
Noah Benden
2025-11-11 19:41:33 +0000 UTCI think your doing fine but i also think he should grow stronger at a faster rate at least untill the sports festival due to the whole eri situation also Momo, Nejire or Uraraka should be the girls he could get with
Nick Taylor
2025-11-11 06:08:51 +0000 UTCToru you can’t write her like that and not make her the female lead fear can easily turn to affection aslong as your not stalking
Duane Sharp
2025-11-11 05:42:13 +0000 UTCMomo!!!
Илья Теремецкий
2025-11-11 04:02:31 +0000 UTCKeep it up
luqwarm
2025-11-11 01:24:55 +0000 UTCThe story is progressing well, and the pacing feels steady. And Toru makes the most sense as the potential love interest. because of the 2 accident that happened and fear, Mina will try to force her to talk to him or something
Truths
2025-11-11 00:55:59 +0000 UTCIt's good so far with good comedy and jokes. For a female lead I think Jirou would be the best option for him personality wise with how he jokes and holds himself. I think she'd be the only one to truly keep him grounded, her attitude being punk like, and a level of emotional intelligence above the others (since she writes music). I'm more curious if he can abuse his quirk for faster muscle recovery and growth because of perfect control and Uzumaki resilience. The main problem would be his dietary requirements and him being broke
The_Flexorcist
2025-11-11 00:42:51 +0000 UTCAs for the story, so far I'm neutral as really nothing has happened so far, as for fml I would say toru only for the fact u seem to be leading that way anyways also with the fact mc should be able to see her thanks to the sharingan which for her is a big thing.
Bassi
2025-11-10 23:16:52 +0000 UTCMomo mina or midnight
Chris
2025-11-10 23:07:31 +0000 UTCI honestly expected 18 chapters in to be developing more his powers and abilities. However this isn't bad it just seems like alot of side quests. I do appreciate the frequency of updates.
Chris
2025-11-10 22:45:05 +0000 UTCMomo or oc
M360
2025-11-10 22:32:03 +0000 UTC
