WOW. Even by your high standards this is uncommonly good. I love the addition of magic, especially the stereotype voodoo. I feel that doesn't get used enough in erotic peril, and I don't know why, it's excellent for it.
I'm really eager to see where this one goes, the only thing I'm left questioning is where the first women went if she "let them go." There's the opportunity for something magical here and I am all for it.