SERIES 001, DANCE LESSONS (Update: Pages 15 + 16 + Revisions)
Added 2024-05-08 02:51:27 +0000 UTC2024-05-07: Poor Pheeb's done got wrung out like a towel. As usual, enjoy the stealth updates to earlier pages.
2024-05-14: Apologies for not immediately doing a close-up on Chloe's face so you could see her dimples clearly.
2024-05-22: Will Chloe and Pheebs figure out how to work together in time to make it to regionals? That's right, this is a sports manga.
2024-05-29: In preparation for an imminent public release/debut of the series, I went back through it and made what I hope are general improvements, making the story a little more entertaining, consistent, and easier to read. Not to imply I spell-checked anything, god forbid.
Comments
I do like this series, I just got stuck in the writing process, which happens too often. But I think this has been in limbo long enough, I'll take another run at the script. If it flows, I'll resume it, if I'm still stuck I'll kill it.
SigmaGal
2026-01-14 23:03:21 +0000 UTCI really want to see this get finished. Is it still on the schedule? Or is it no longer a project you intend to complete?
Razor
2026-01-14 22:56:25 +0000 UTCIt's on my work schedule! I like this series a lot too, it just got interrupted.
SigmaGal
2025-07-28 01:51:24 +0000 UTCMiss this - hope that you do continue it please
Goldendawn
2025-07-28 01:49:58 +0000 UTCPg 9 your *body* appears durable
Turkey
2024-05-08 07:48:11 +0000 UTC
