Rough-cut for feedback: Minecraft Dream video
Added 2021-02-02 00:46:54 +0000 UTCUPDATE: The video out! https://youtu.be/8Ko3TdPy0TU Thank you so much for your feedback everyone; the video is far better for it. (Let me know if I've missed anything!)
Right. About 7.5 trillion people have requested that I make a video about the Dream speedrun of Minecraft 1.16 controversy. So I have finally done it. Given how many young people are suddenly interested in statistics because of this drama, it feels like a dereliction of duty if I don't do something!
This is the rough-cut of my video. As you will see, there is still a lot of polishing to be done. But I'm a bit apprehensive about the level of scrutiny this video is likely to get, so I thought it would be best to stress-test an early version on you fine folk.
Please do through it with a fine fact comb and let me know any and all suggestions you may have. A discussion in the comments here would be ideal, but feel free to email me privately as well.
- Let me know if anything could be edited out. (eg: could the section from 01:18 to 01:14 be removed to speed things up?)
- Flag-up any mistakes. (eg: at 22:23 the wrong expression is high-lighted.)
- General suggestions to make it clearer. (eg: *waves arms around in general*)
If you have no idea what this is all about: I'd also like your feedback on what the video is like for someone coming in cold! I've been thinking about it for so long I no longer know what is what.
PS Please do not share this version of the video! If it gets more views than I have patreon supporters I'll have to take it down.
