Widow's New Prey - Juno
Added 2024-08-20 16:00:07 +0000 UTCHey there, Patreon supporters!
Season 12 of Overwatch is coming out and I thought I'd give you a bit of my thoughts about the new hero Juno. Both and text wise.
This is my first time writing a proper story with a bigger piece like this. I had alot of fun writing it, and though my english is not the best, I still hope you'll appreciate at least me trying to write something.
Also, the folder below contains both art and story. I didn't want to risk getting potentially banned by Patreon, so it's seperately in a folder.
I am open to receiving constructive criticism, especially with the writing part.
Let me know if you're interested in more written stories with art like this.
Have a nice day everyone!
Comments
This was quite decent for a first attempt. I think I'd like to say, though, is that it isn't really clear how Widowmaker is webbing Juno. Is it coming from her hands? A device? It's obviously not something she can do in canon, so next time, it might be worth giving a brief explanation as to how she's doing it. Also, "With a single grapple of her hook" sounds odd to me; a better way to write it might be "With a single shot of her grapple hook"
Great Axiom
2024-08-20 17:48:30 +0000 UTCVery cool thumbs up emoji
hinoen
2024-08-20 16:14:11 +0000 UTC
